小唐 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我批改GEPT模擬考作文語翻譯

最近自己在常春藤的 GEPT 模擬試題(賴世雄編的那本), 可惜作文和翻譯的部分解答本只有範文, 沒有老師能幫我批改, 想請各位網友高手幫我挑出我翻譯和作文內的錯誤與不良寫法:

中文: 在台灣開車很危險。車輛總是很多, 也常看到車子在蛇行。車禍一直都在發生. 每一年都有好幾千人因為酒醉駕駛而喪命。解決惡劣駕駛人這個問題一個方法就是對他們施以更重的罰金或是懲處。如果繼續違反交通規則的話, 他們的駕照就應該永遠吊銷。我知道這聽起來挺嚴峻的, 但我相信唯有這樣做, 我們才能改善台灣的交通。

我的翻譯:

It's very dangerous about driving in Taiwan. There are always so many cars, and you may see them driving as snack oftenly. There're car accidents happening constantly. Every year, so many thousands of people die because of drunk driving. There's one way to solve this issue about those bad drivers is cast more serious punishment on them. Their driver licenses will be canceled permanently if they don't obey the traffic rule again. I know it sounds so serious, but I really believe we could improve the traffic in TW inly if we do in this way.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    你的翻譯的錯誤不多 :-)

    Driving in Taiwan is very dangerous. There are always a lot of cars, and you will often see cars snaking on the street. Accidents are always happening. Every year, thousands of people die from drunk driving. One method of solving this problem (of bad drivers可以省略) is to issue a bigger fine, or more serious punishment. If they continue to break traffic rules, their licenses should be revoked. I know that this sounds quite severe, but I believe this is the only way for us to improve Taiwan's roads (這個比traffic適合).

    我的意見:

    I agree with you. Drunk driving, or "driving under the influence" (DUI) is a big problem in the States also. What's even worse is that a drunk driver can accidentally run over and kill a pedestrian, or kill others in an accident, and their jail sentences are usually only a few years at best. This is pathetic. I wonder what the punishment is in Taiwan when a drunk driver ends up killing someone.

    Source(s): 我是美國人
  • 5 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    對,你這樣子翻譯沒錯。

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