俊民 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

英文文法訂正

因為想把學英文,但是程度不佳,所以只好上來請教達人。

這是我今天的事情,請看有哪裡需要修正。謝謝您

My old brother told me have a workman shall maintain bathroom door in saturday. Then , the workman who is late and even disappeared in the morning that feel so said . because of I need to wait him.

Update:

that feel so said 是指我,不是工人

Update 2:

Hi 0≒1, 請教一下幾點

1. 如果句子改成這樣是否比較能表達我的意思(您表達的更容易懂)

The workman who is late and even disappeared in the morning let me feel so said

2.Saturday 用 in , 是指在星期六這天的意思嗎?

那有沒有常見的例外用 on 來表示 年/月/周/日 .

謝謝

Update 3:

Dear COLA, 本人不住台北,謝了

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  • 10 years ago
    Best Answer

    My brother told me that there would be a workman showing up today to repair the bathroom door. However, the workman was late and I waited for him for hours. I felt so upset about it.

    2010-02-07 00:21:50 補充:

    -說brother就好了, 在英文裡沒有必要強調older

    -tell sb. + that + 子句(一個完整的句型結構)

    -因為告訴用了過去式, 所以子句用would表示以過去的觀點看到的未來

    -shall一般用在第一人稱或第二人稱

    -on Saturday 介係詞為on

    -第二句 你的語意變成"那個遲到甚至消失的工人感到很傷心",所以我整句改掉

    -because of + 名詞

    -wait + for + sb.

  • 10 years ago

    我的英文也只是還好但試試看

    My older brother told me that a worker will maintain the bathroom door in the

    saturday morning . Then , the worker who is late and even disappeared in the

    morning feel sorry , as i had to wait for him.

    有神麼不當就家我及時 mydidodog@yahoo.com.tw

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