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Her unusual frank, warm, pure, firm and resolute, even if she is very poor, but she will not always wallow in degeneration, she facing all around old-fashioned brutal, she will be a school of strength. Looks like ANDY's aunt to have one time to fall ill, she does not count completely hates, to go back old... show more

Her unusual frank, warm, pure, firm and resolute, even if she is very poor, but she will not always wallow in degeneration, she facing all around old-fashioned brutal, she will be a school of strength. Looks like ANDY's aunt to have one time to fall ill, she does not count completely hates, to go back old visits her, but before the aunt just before the end, confesses with ANDY, said that she before all sorts of is not good to her, she without hesitation has also forgiven the aunt, such bearing is disciplines under the persistent and hard-working environment. But in has in the middle of a lucky chance, ANDY has inherited a big property, she also insisted that does not take a person to monopolize, but divides into it four to divide equally the relative who knew for her. Some people will be very since childhood poor, grow up later to money unusual regarding, but ANDY instead to benefit unusual treating with indifference, will look like her to fall in love with Mr. from the very beginning Rochester, also will be because of appreciates her talent, but will not be in the world mortal eyes fame and fortune, when therefore Luo Qisi reached gentleman to lose the wealth, the status, even both eyes lost one's sight, the body of physical disabilities, ANDY still did not change the original intention, decided that must follow him to spend together the life .

她非常的坦率,熱情,純真,堅毅,即使她很貧窮,但是她從來就不會自甘墮落,她面對... 而在有一次機緣當中,ANDY繼承了一大筆的財產,她也堅持不要一個人獨享,而把它分...
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ANDY就是這樣一個真誠的人,她對生命從不氣餒,不管上天怎麼考驗她,她都一派堅...

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Update: Jane Eyre is this kind of sincere person, she ever is not discouraged to the life, no matter how ascends the sky to test her, her school endured very. She is also the practice which is worthy of the reputation, because to a new environment,
Update 2: she will not always flinch, instead was proceeds, to march forward courageously creates belongs to her new life, her self-respect was self-possessed is also supervising she more positive upward life.
Update 3: In this kind of novel's character, has driven a generations of another generation of reader, moreover also touched each to want to live clearly has the dignity mind.
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