Karian asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我睇下我的英文文法對不對

幫我睇下我的英文文法對不對

In Padua, Kate was the oldest daughter of Baptist. She was a lady with such and ungovernable temper, so there were no men wanted to marry her. However, Paul was interested in this lady, be wanted to marry this famous shrew and to tame her into a gentle wife who would obey him.

After he married Kate, he started his plans to tame his shrewish wife. At first, he pretend to be a madman, he threw the meat on the floor to make Kate didn’t have anything to eat; he throw the bedclothes around the room so that she was forced to sit down in a chair. He also shouted his loudly so that Kate can not take a rest. At last, proud Kate begged Paul to give her some meat politely. Paul succeeded in making her wife started to obey him.

Then, Paul started his second plan. He promised Kate to bring her to see her father, but he ordered Kate to agree to everything he said. Whatever he wish to call it, that is what it is, otherwise, he won’t let her see her father. On the journey, Kate can also do it and obeyed to her husband more.

When they arrived, Kate’s father’s room, Paul thought Kate had become a obedient wife. Then, he betted with Luis, who was a husband of Kate’s sister. Paul also betted with Harry, the other newly married man. They betted on which wife was the most obedient. At first, Luis and Harry thought their wives must be more obedient than Paul’s wife. However, when Luis and Harry sent for their wives, their wives didn’t come and said they were very busy. However, when Paul’s ordered his wife to come, Kate came to Paul quickly and politely.

Therefore, Paul won the bet and gained many money. Finally, Kate became the most obedient wife in Padua.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    There are quite a number of grammatical mistakes in the passage which I corrected as follows:

    In Padua, Kate was the oldest daughter of Baptist. She was a lady with such

    an ungovernable temper that no one wanted to marry her. However, Paul was

    interested in this lady. He wanted to marry this notorious shrew to tame her

    into a gentle wife who would obey him.

    After marrying Kate, he started his plans to tame his shrewish wife. At first, he

    pretended to be a mad man. He threw meat on the floor, so Kate did not have

    anything to eat. He threw bedclothes all over the room so that she was forced

    to sit on a chair. He also shouted loudly so that Kate could not take a rest. At

    last, proud Kate begged Paul politely to give her some meat. Paul succeeded

    in his first plan to make her wife obey him.

    Then, Paul started his second plan. He promised Kate to bring her to her father

    if and only if she would agree to whatever he ordered her; otherwise he would

    not let her see her father. On the journey, Kate was trained to become more

    submissive to her husband.

    When they arrived in the room of Kate's father, Paul thought Kate had

    become an obedient wife. Then, he got a bet with Luis who was the

    husband of Kate's sister, and Harry who was a newly married man,

    on who had the most obedient wife among them. At first, Luis and Harry

    thought that their wives must be more obedient than Paul's wife.

    However, when Luis and Harry sent for their wives, they did not come

    and said they were very busy. On the contrary, when Paul ordered his wife

    to come, Kate came to him quickly and politely.

    Therefore, Paul won the bet and gained a lot of money. Finally, Kate became

    the most obedient wife in Padua.

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  • 1 decade ago

    我搵到小小錯誤

    希望幫到你:)

    In Padua, Kate was the oldest daughter of Baptist. She was a lady with such and ungovernable temper, so there were no men wanted to marry her. However, Paul was interested in this lady, be wanted to marry this famous shrew and to tame her into a gentle wife who would obey him.

    After he married Kate, he started his plans to tame his shrewish wife. At first, he pretend to be a madman, he threw the meat on the floor to make Kate didn’t have anything to eat; he throw the bedclothes around the room so that she was forced to sit down in a chair. He also shouted his loudly so that Kate can not take a rest. At last, proud Kate begged Paul to give her some meat politely. Paul succeeded in making her wife started to obey him.

    Then, Paul started his second plan. He promised Kate to bring her to see her father, but he ordered Kate to agree to everything he said. Whatever he wish to call it, that is what it is, otherwise, he won’t let her see her father. On the journey, Kate can also do it and obeyed to her husband more.

    When they arrived, Kate’s father’s room, Paul thought Kate had become a obedient wife. Then, he betted with Luis, 1. who was a husband of Kate’s sister . Paul also betted with Harry, the other newly married man. 2. They betted on which wife was the most obedient . At first, Luis and Harry thought their wives must be more obedient than Paul’s wife. However, when Luis and Harry sent for their wives, their wives didn’t come and said they were very busy. However, when Paul’s ordered his wife to come, Kate came to Paul quickly and politely.

    Therefore, Paul won the bet and gained many money. Finally, Kate became the most obedient wife in Padua.

    1. who was a husband of Kate’s sister

    應該改成who was the husband of Kate’s sister

    2. They betted on which wife was the most obedient

    應該改成They betted on the wife who was the most obedient

    以上係我小小意見

    如有錯誤

    歡迎指證

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  • 1 decade ago

    你的文法是對的,繁體中文版:

    在帕多瓦, Kate是浸禮會教友的最老的女兒。 她是有這樣的一個夫人,並且難管制脾氣,那么那裡是沒有人想与她结婚。 然而,保羅是對這個夫人感兴趣,是想与這個著名潑婦结婚和馴服她入會服從他的一個柔和的妻子。 在他與Kate結婚之後,他開始他的計劃馴服他的脾氣壞妻子。 起初,他假裝是狂人,他投擲在地板上的肉做Kate沒有什么吃; 他在屋子附近投擲床單,以便她在椅子被迫使坐下。 他響亮地也呼喊他的,以便Kate不可能採取休息。 在前,驕傲的Kate乞求保羅禮貌地給她一些肉。 保羅在做她的妻子成功開始服從他。 然后,保羅開始了他的第二個計劃。 他許諾Kate帶來她看她的父親,但是他预定Kate赞成他說的一切。 什麼他希望称它,那是什麼是,否則,他不會讓她看她的父親。 在旅途, Kate可能也做它和更服從對她的丈夫。 當他們到達了, Kate的父親的室,保羅想法Kate适合一個服從的妻子。 然后,他打賭了與Luis,是Kate的姐妹的丈夫。 保羅也打賭了以哈里,另一個最近已婚人。 他們在哪個妻子打賭了最服從。 起初, Luis和哈里認為他們的妻子比保羅的妻子一定服從。 然而,當為他們的妻子和哈里送的Luis,他們的妻子沒有來和說他們是非常繁忙的。 然而,當保羅的被定购他的妻子來的, Kate迅速和禮貌地來了到保羅。 所以,保羅贏取了賭注並且獲取了許多金錢。 终于, Kate在帕多瓦适合最服從的妻子。

    2010-01-10 18:15:30 補充:

    希望可以幫到你

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