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【中翻英】CSI犯罪現場觀後心得

我的英文老師叫我們交一篇影片的英文心得報告~

由於我英文程度不是很好,

Q:希望熟悉英文格式的高手們能幫忙我翻譯@@

因為老師特別"提醒"我們要注重英文的格式,

不然會扣分 ex:My name is reuben, i like singing.

逗號後面要空一小格、還有很多寫作的規則

聽得我湖煞煞,希望高手們能指導我一些基本的英文寫作格式

內容如下(翻譯的意思差不多就行了)

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  由於老師的推薦,我接觸了美國影集"CSI犯罪現場",這部影集最特別的地方,在於他的題材很與眾不同,美國的影集類似台灣的肥皂劇(Soap Operas)或分季的卡通(Animation)航海王(ONE_PIECE),不過在台灣拍攝這樣的題材,觀眾可能不會買單。

  此劇一開始,探員正在觀察馬路上一坨佈滿血的腸子,由於太過真實,

下一秒我就知道我該抱著正經的態度來觀看這部影集。這集最精彩的部分莫過於,歹徒綁架了探員並要求贖金,然而當警方跟歹徒面對面交涉時,歹徒又利用事先藏在身上的炸彈自爆,這下不但巨額贖金沒了,連人質的下落也不得而知,可以知道的是,這名人質會在歹徒精心設計過的密閉空間內窒息而死,沒有人可以幫她收屍。

  不過劇情到這邊就結束了,還是不太懂導演想傳達什麼訊息,如果能有後續的發展的話,我想這集會更精彩。

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  • 小黑
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    由於老師的推薦~不過在台灣拍攝這樣的題材,觀眾可能不會買單。

    With my teacher’s strong recommendation,

    I start to watch the America

    serial episodes of Crime Sense Investigation, as well-known as CSI. As serial

    episodes, CSI provides a very different content, which includes murder,

    robbery, even terrorism, from others. This America

    serial is a little like the soap operas in Taiwan

    or as the same as the serial animation of ONE PIECE in Japan . However,

    CSI’s content is not popular for people living in Taiwan, because people do not

    like the vivid and cruel scenes.

      

    此劇一開始~沒有人可以幫她收屍。

    In the beginning of this serial of

    CSI, police officers are investigating on the intestines which is separating

    all around the street. This scene is so vivid that I totally understand that I

    should start to pay a better attention on watching this serial. The most

    exciting scene in this serial is happened at the moment when police officers

    negotiated with evildoer. The evildoer commits a crime of kidnapping a police

    office and asks for a ransom for exchanging the hostage. Later, the criminal

    detonates a bomb which he ties around his body in advance, and dies of the bomb

    explosion. No only the ransom breaks into pieces, but also the further

    information of hostage is lost due to the death of criminal. Only one message

    from criminal is that the hostage would stay in a well-designed room, and will

    be killed by asphyxia. The most important thing is that no one knew where is

    the hostage.

    不過劇情到這邊就結束了~我想這集會更精彩。

    The plot ends up in this scene. In

    fact, I do not understand what message or announcement the writer wants to tell

    us. However, I believe that this episode will be more interesting if there is

    any follow-up or further scenario.

    2009-12-29 16:49:38 補充:

    ★基本格式:

    1、大小寫一定要正確,我想版主應該很清楚大小寫的問題了。

    2、通常英文的開頭會按一次的tab鍵或是兩下空白鍵,有點類似我們寫中文作文時,每段開頭會空兩格不寫是相同道理。

    2009-12-29 16:49:42 補充:

    3、出現兩個對等主句時,要用頭點分開。如and, but等等連接詞所連接的對等句子。注意,逗點出現的位置可參考以上文章。如果你是用moreover, furthermore, however, neverthess當連接詞,則逗點符號的用法如下: He is a student; however, he does not like to study.

    4、我想細節很多,不過以上的3個重點有遵守到基本上就不會犯什麼錯了。

    ps: 這裡的格式可能會造成亂碼或不當的斷句。你還是貼回word檔檢查一下好了。

  • Anonymous
    6 years ago
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