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巍燁 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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The Ugly truth is a typical romantic comedy Hollywood movie concerning the relationships. In this film, the difference between men and women is clear. Mostly women want to romance while men want sex. What would happen when two different kinds of people who have different needs are in relationship? The movie is not only just funny but also telling what the relationship is like in the present generation. These are the tough problems of relationship that are shown in the movie.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    你的文章以用字來說,已經寫得很好。最大的問題出在後半部分句子前後關係組織不良,思緒跳動突兀。改一點文法、以及使文章通順的字序和句序,就很好了:

    "The Ugly Truth" is a typical Hollywood romantic comedy concerning relationships. In this film, the difference between men and women is clear. Women mostly want romance while men want sex. What would happen when two different kinds of people who have different needs are in relationship? These are the tough problems of a relationship that are shown in the movie. The movie is not only funny but also shows what relationships are like in the present generation.

    The Ugly Truth 是電影名,truth 要大寫,最好用斜體字,不然用引號括弧起來。

    romantic comedy 是電影的一種類型,所以不需要再用 movie,將 Hollywood 移到前面, Hollywood romantic comedy 就很好。 relationships 不必加冠詞。

    Mostly women want 應該說 Women mostly want 才會順,因為是 mostly want,而不是 Mostly women。 另外 want to romance 不好,romance 本來就可以當名詞,去掉 to 改成 want romance 和 want sex 才會對仗。

    妳原來的最後一句 These are.....,句子不是不好,但講的是電影所展現的 「兩性問題」,跟前一句很不搭調,顯得很突兀、很多餘,加上突然出現 these are the tough problems,從前一句看不出 these 指什麼?將它調到 What would happen .... are in relationships? 之後,延續講「問題」,就很順了。

    最後一句調到前面之後,The movie is not only....... in the present generation. 可以當成結論,不過,妳如果要在最後再補一句簡單的結論,也無妨。

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  • 1 decade ago

    The ugly truth is a typical romantic comedy Hollywood movie that concerns the relationships. (個人是因為不太確定主動還被動,所以不敢用分詞構句)

    In this film, the differences between men and women is interpretated vividly. It is often pointed out that women crave for romance while men are desperate for sex. What kind of spark might be occured when two different types of people who have extremely diverse requires be togehter? The movie is not only hilarious but also educative on telling people what is precious in a relationship.

    最後一句我不太懂你想表啥什麼耶

    因為這樣接有點卡卡的

    可以的話麻煩你補充一下喔,謝謝~

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  • 1 decade ago

    訂正不敢當,與你分享一下我的寫法:

    The Ugly Truth is a typical Hollywood romantic comedy concerning relationships.

    In this film, the differences between men and women are clear.

    Mostly what women want is romance while men want sex.

    What would happen when two different kinds of people who require different things are in relationship?

    The movie is not only funny but also telling what relationship in the present generation is like.

    These are the tough problems of relationship shown in the movie.

    By Reticuli

    http://www.wretch.cc/blog/Reticuli

    Source(s): my information
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