Nian asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

我寫了一段英文對話,希望有人能幫我檢查哪裡出錯

我寫了一段英文對話,希望有人能幫我檢查哪裡出錯並告訴我正確寫法,

我的英文程度非常差,所以對話都是拼湊出來的,文法我都不懂,我是先寫出中文再翻譯的,希望英文好的人能幫我 以下若有中文出現,那就是我翻不出來

A travel agency (A):May I help you?

A tourist (B):Yes! I have 10 days-long vacation in August, how should I arrange?

(A):Um... I have a suggestion that you can take a vacation to China, here has 3 plans to refer for you.

(B):China? Let me see…

(A):(puts out 3 material) you look, there are 3 Chinese popular sightseeing place of 2010. I recommend Beijing very much. This place had several thousand year history, and filled with the cultural breath.

(B):Oh. In fact, my budget only 30000, 也許再多一些?再多就是35000了.

(A):Yes, that was Sichuan, There is 五彩池 in Sichuan's Jiuzhaigou, and there is one of scenic spot essence.

(B):Sichuan? I thought that I have no interest in China, can I have another choice, besides China? seperately, I hope in Asia.

(A):不曉得您是否接受泰國? Here is 2 cheaper plans, famous Bangkok and Chiang Mai.

(B):I know that Thailand is a very good place! About Bangkok,it has name“the Eastern Venice” perhaps “city of the angel”! Moreover, My favorite brand is Good Mixer!

(A):Yes? Then you want to go to Thailand?

(B):Oh, no! In fact, I am Taiwan and Thailand's 混血兒, I live in Thailand until I am 12 years old, I also went back to visited my parents in May. They are very happy!

(A):I knew. Then Indonesia? You also know? 峇里島 is very famous sightseeing place!

(B):Um, actually, I have more interest in Hong Kong!

(A):Hong Kong, conformed to the plan which you budgeted are Kuangjiao!

(B):…But, my friends recommend me to go to Japan, I like the idol association just has a concert in August! Do you know the association EXILE?

(A):不好意思, actually, I am not understand EXILE. Do you decide Japan?

(B):Yes, Japan! I hoped that can be able to have 5 day of above traveling schedule arrangement.

(A):Hokkaido or Kyoto? Osaka? Where is your decision?

(B):I choose Osaka in Japanese. Someone said that there is the American village!

(A):Yes, 那麻煩請您先填寫一些資料.

(B):Okay.

Update:

這是我原本寫的中文對話

旅行社:您好,請問有什麼需要幫助的嗎?

客人:有的,我在8月有10天的假期,我該如何安排呢?

旅行社:嗯...我有個建議,您可以去中國大陸,而我們這裡也剛好有3個旅遊方案供您參考.

客人:中國嗎?我看看...

旅行社:(拿出3份資料)您看,這是今年的3個中國熱門觀光地點.我個人很推薦北京呢.這個地方有幾千年的歷史了,充滿了文化氣息.

客人:喔,事實上,我的預算只有30000塊,也許再多一些?再多就是35000了.

旅行社:是的,那就是四川了,四川的九寨溝有五彩池,是風景區的精華之一.

客人:四川嗎?我想我對中國不是很有興趣,我還能夠有別的選擇嗎?除了中國之外的,另外,我希望在亞洲.

Update 2:

旅行社:不曉得您是否接受泰國?這裡有2個比較便宜的方案,著名的曼谷和清邁.

客人:這個我知道,泰國真是個很不錯的地方呢!關於曼谷,還有「東方威尼斯」或是「天使之城」之稱呢!而且,我個人十分喜愛Good Mixer這個品牌呢!

旅行社:是嗎?那您就是想去泰國了嗎?

客人:喔,不!事實上,我是台灣和泰國的混血兒,一直到12歲之前,我都住在泰國呢,5月時,我還回去探望了父母.他們都很開心呢!

旅行社:我知道了.那麼印尼呢?您也知道吧?峇里島是很有名的觀光地點呢!

客人:嗯,我倒是對香港比較有興趣呢!

Update 3:

旅行社:香港的話,符合您預算的方案就是旺角了!

客人:嗯...但是,我的朋友都推薦我去日本呢,我喜愛的偶像團體剛好在8月有一場演唱會喔!不曉得你知不知道放浪兄弟 (EXILE)這個團體?

旅行社:不好意思,其實我不太了解放浪兄弟 (EXILE).那麼,您是決定去日本了吧?

客人:是的,就去日本吧!我希望能夠有5天以上的行程安排.

旅行社:北海道或京都?還是大阪?您的決定是哪裡呢?

客人:我選擇日本大阪.聽說那裡有個美國村呢!

旅行社:是的,那麻煩請您先填寫一些資料.

客人:好的.

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    我再幫你翻一 次

    Travel: Hello is there any need of help do?

    Guest: Yes, I have 10 days in the August holiday, how do I arrange it?

    Travel: ah ... I have a suggestion, you can go to mainland China, and we are here also happens to have three tour options for your reference.

    Guests: China? Me see

    Travel: (come up with three copies of data) you see, this is this year's three popular tourist sites in China. Beijing, I personally recommend it. This place for thousands of years old, full of culture.

    Guest: Oh, in fact, my budget is only 30000,

    and perhaps a few more? More that 35,000 of the.

    Travel: Yes, that is, Sichuan, and Sichuan Jiuzhaigou are Wucaiche is the essence of one of the scenic area.

    Guests: Sichuan? I think I was not very interested in China, I can have a choice? Addition to China, and the other, I hope that in Asia.

    Travel: I do not know whether you accept the Thai? There are two relatively inexpensive program, the famous Bangkok and Chiang Mai.

    Guests: This I know, Thailand is indeed a very good place for it! On Bangkok, as well as "Oriental Venice or City of Angels," said it! And I, personally, love Good Mixer brand it!

    Travel: Really? What do you want to go to Thailand is that it?

    Guest: Oh, no! In fact, I half-breed in Taiwan and Thailand, has been to 12 years old, I live in Thailand and then, in May, I still go back to visit his parents. They were all very happy then!

    Travel: I know. Then Indonesia? You know? Bali Island is a famous sightseeing spots it!

    Guests: ah, I'd have more interest in Hong Kong it!

    Travel: Hong Kong, then the program is in line with your budget in Mong Kok!

    Guests: ah ... but my friends have recommended it I went to Japan, my favorite idol groups happen to be in August there was a concert Oh! I do not know, do you know Exile (EXILE) this group?

    Travel: I beg your pardon, in fact, I do not quite understand Exile (EXILE). So, you decided to go to Japan, right?

    有問題再問我

    Guest=客人

    Travel=旅行社

    2009-12-26 23:03:33 補充:

    Travel: I beg your pardon, in fact, I do not quite understand Exile (EXILE). So, you decided to go to Japan, right?

    Guest: Yes, went to the Japanese bar! I hope to have more than 5 days itinerary.

    Travel: Hokkaido or Kyoto? Or Osaka? Your decision is wrong?

    貼不下在這

    2009-12-26 23:04:00 補充:

    Guest: I choose to Osaka, Japan. Heard of an American Village, where it!

    Travel: Yes, that trouble you to fill out some information.

    Guests: Yes.

    貼不下在這

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