Kim asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

What do you think of this? Is it any good?

Caught between the sun and the moon

Lost between day and night

Unknown where or what I am

A mystery I need help solving

What do I feel?

Does it even have a name?

This endless confusion consumes me

And I am trapped in its depths

Spinning and swirling and twirling

Dizzy and drunk with it

Am I happy or sad?

Celebrating or mourning?

This is my life

There is no escape

But do I care?

It’s not evil or bad

Just in between-


Confusing yet enticing

Enchanting and intoxicating

This is me

It’s who I am

*just randomly wrote this-whatever came to my head. what do you think?


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