青青 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我修改英文自傳

After graduation I entered the SiS and UMC, a total of four years and two months as a technician. Work as a technician, so I understand the emergence of a new product,from production to delivery are very important.

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I have a second job as a proliferation of assistant engineers, Hermes-Epitek Corp , These work for me to learn to have positive interactions with customers and the ability to communicate.

(這段希望用離開UMC後,到Hermes-Epitek Corp 服務近4年)

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Felt that there would develop a good working attitude, with a self-motivated, responsibility, hope to reach the future, the company has always been strict requirements of employees,combined with their own requirements, for the work also uphold the principle of a dedicated, for things that are not familiar with will bother to bring power to learn and have confidence in the future of the company can reach to my needs and objectives.

(這段想寫 自覺有培養良好的工作態度,具有上進心、責任感,對於工作也秉持著盡心盡力的原則下,對於不熟悉的事物必定花心力學習,有自信能達到未來公司給我的要求與目標。)

請用詞簡單明瞭,面試需要用到,再麻煩幫我除錯

感謝!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I worked as a technician at Sis and UMC for four years and two months after graduation. Working as a technician, I learn that the procedure of the emergence(不是很了解你想說什麼 你想說 一個新產品的發明? 還是引進新產品呢?) of a new product such as production and delivery are very important to the success of the product.

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    I worked as a proliferation/assistant engineers at Hermes-Epitek Corp. for my second job. The experience was very valuable for me since I learn how to interact and communicate with customers effectively.

    (小小建議 建議你最好不要寫說you learn how to interact with customers,,,因為你這樣聽起來好像就像你之前完全不會跟customers interact, communication is a skill that you can improve on, but i'm not so sure if there are *interactional skills*

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    I am confident that my characteristic such as initiative, responsible, and self-motivated will contribute to the position as a *職位* at 公司名稱 Moreover, I always seek for opportunities to learn and love to improve on my skills. I believe that I can meet and exceed the requirements as a 職位 at 公司名稱, and complete the assigned task.

    小小建議 感覺上你多說一點你為了之前的公司做了什麼樣的事會更好喔^^

    有問題可以再補充問我

    Source(s): 在加拿大 讀人力資源的我
  • 1 decade ago

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  • chen
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    After graduation, I entered the SiS and UMC and worked as

    ..a technician for the four years and two months.

    so I understand the emergence of a new product,

    in which it comes from the production to delivery

    that processes are very important.

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    I had a second job as a proliferation of assistant engineers,

    .....Hermes-Epitek Corp,

    These worked for me to learn the having positive interactions

    ...with customers and the ability to communicate.

    (這段希望用離開UMC後,到Hermes-Epitek Corp 服務近4年)

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    Felt that, there would develop a good working attitude,

    ..with a self-motivated, responsibility, hope to reach the future,

    ..the company has always been strict the requirements of

    ...employees, combined with their own requirements,

    ..for the work also uphold the principle of a dedicated

    ..for the things that are not familiar with will bother

    .to bring power to learn and have confidence

    ..in the future of the company

    .which can reach to my needs and objectives.

    你的文章很好, 我抄寫一次供參考.

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