GDJ asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文翻譯.....”讓你安心也讓關心你的人放心”@15點喔!

"讓你安心也讓關心你的人放心"

這句話被當SLOGAN使用,需要一句英文的翻譯。

希望是可以簡潔有利,表達清楚又易被記住。

之前有請友人先翻譯一句,如下

"let you feel at ease, let those who care about you to rest assured."

請各位大大幫幫忙!!!!

Update:

感謝ssseditor的提醒,我補充依下

該品牌主要是研發3C產品,目前有一商品是"防搶鈴"。

送禮自用兩相宜,所以才會延伸出,"讓你安心也讓關心你的人放心"這句SLOGAN。

主要品牌精神-秉持「守護」的精神,致力於研發一系列的個人守護用品,

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  • 1 decade ago
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    讓你安心也讓關心你的人放心

    Peace of mind for you and your loved ones.

    or

    Peace of mind for you and for the concerned.

    the concerned 代表那些關心的人

    2009-12-10 13:05:41 補充:

    slogan 不需限制完整句子文法

    需簡潔有力

    2009-12-10 16:51:16 補充:

    Peace of mind for you and the ones who care about you.

    Peace of mind for you and the ones who care.

    Pease of mind for you and the ones who love you.

    the ones 也可以用 those

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I like what "寫不完也要寫" wrote using the phrase "peace of mind".

    What kevin wrote was also pretty good.

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  • Joseph
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    稍微偏一點

    Security for you, peace of mind for those who care about you.

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  • Kevin
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    「讓你安心,也讓關心你的人放心。」

    這句中文可以沒有主詞,但是英文可不能依樣畫葫蘆。當成slogan的話,主詞應該是「我們」。不然就寫成動狀詞,而不用句子。

    另外,以語意的轉換為主,不必拘泥於文字。

    We dispel worry, for you and those who care about you.

    Dispelling worry for you and those who care about you

    2009-12-10 15:05:53 補充:

    如果是這樣, 用片語形式吧.

    Deterring/Dispelling Worry, for You and Those Concerned about You

    2009-12-10 16:35:46 補充:

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  • 1 decade ago

    既然是 slogan,要像 vicky 所譯一樣簡短有力,但你沒說行業、沒說用在什麼地方,是什麼樣的「安心」、放什麼心?譯出來的英文動詞用錯場合會鬧笑話。最好補充說明一下。

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  • 1 decade ago

    smoothe you and the people care about you.

    Source(s): me
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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    讓你安心也讓關心你的人放心

    Let you relieved also let care that you the person felt relieved

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