幫我改英文-省略句

請幫我改以下省略過程的還原,是否正確!

原句:Nuclei that are not magnetically equivalent sometimes give second-order spectra, in which unexpected peaks may appear in multiplets.

(1) in which=in second-order spectra 放回peaks後面

(2)unexpected=that are unexpected 其中that是Nuclei 的關代(我並不是很確定that是否是Nuclei的關代)

還原句: Nuclei that are not magnetically equivalent sometimes give second-order spectra, that are unexpected peaks in second-order spectra may appear in multiplets.

請英文不錯的朋友幫我改一下,謝謝!

Update:

請問kevin大師

我的還原句中

Nuclei that are not magnetically equivalent sometimes give second-order spectra, that are unexpected peaks in second-order spectra may appear in multiplets.

上面是不是少了連接詞的意思呢?

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  • Kevin
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    1 decade ago
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    Nuclei that are not magnetically equivalent sometimes give second-order spectra, in which unexpected peaks may appear in multiplets. =

    Nuclei that(=which) are not magnetically equivalent sometimes give second-order spectra , and unexpected peaks may appear in multiplets in these second-order spectra.

    2009-12-09 09:00:40 補充:

    版主的寫法並不恰當.

    我覺得您應該從"如何合併"著手學習, 而不是在基本觀念薄弱的情況下來"還原句子". 畢竟合併後的句子是較高階的句型, 是要學習熟練的目標. 要求自己在閱讀合併句時能清楚了解語意, 才是重點. 作到之後, 除非您跟在下一樣要教學生, 否則對"還原句子"的需求其實並不多.

    2009-12-09 09:01:25 補充:

    我用比較簡易的句子來說明. 假如要表達下面的語意:

    我們有時候會開會, 在會議中大家提供新的想法.

    從最基本的寫法:

    We sometimes hold meetings.

    Everyone may speak at will in the meetings.

    2009-12-09 09:02:05 補充:

    用對等連接詞合併:

    We sometimes hold meetings, AND everyone may speak at will in the meetings.

    為了讓句子更簡潔, 把重複的部分[the meetings]用[which]取代. 同時, [which]本身也有連接詞的功能, 所以[AND]也可以省掉:

    We sometimes hold meetings, everyone may speak at will in WHICH.

    2009-12-09 09:02:30 補充:

    連接詞基本上都是擺在該子句的前端:

    We sometimes hold meetings, [WHICH] everyone may speak at will in.

    在本句中, [in the meetings]是表達地方場合的一組副詞片語, 其組成字之間的親合力極強, 所以多數人會把[in]一起搬到前面去:

    We sometimes hold meetings, in [WHICH] may speak at will.

    2009-12-09 09:03:17 補充:

    如果這樣的過程您可以了解, 那麼最後這個句子的語意, 不必把結構還原就可以很清楚了. 這樣, 您再回頭去看您的句子, 只是字詞的複雜度增加了, 但結構完全一樣, 是不是就很清楚了?

    [We]=[Nuclei that are not magnetically equivalent]

    (that are not magnetically equivalent)是一個形容詞子句, 修飾nuclei.

    [hold]=[give]

    2009-12-09 09:03:32 補充:

    [meetings]=[second-order spectra]=[which]

    [everyone]=[unexpected peaks ]

    [may speak]=[may appear]

    [at will]=[in multiplets]

    這樣, 您看出您的寫法有什麼問題了嗎?

    2009-12-09 09:10:16 補充:

    訂正:

    所以多數人會把[in]一起搬到前面去:

    We sometimes hold meetings, in [WHICH] everyone may speak at will.

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