強森 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我改一下我寫的英文作文

chairman of department If I were a chairman of department, I were learned

how to enhance my leadership and be able to leading my staffs more efficiently.

For me, a good chairman needs to have a good

leading ability to deal with their work. For example, a good manager is not necessary

to show their working skills but leadership. Moreover, the operation of company

is always base on a group of people and never one person, so the leading way is

a key point which decides company’s profit and loss.

In

a word, a good chairman should have sufficient leadership to lead their team

and able to produce some positive achievement for the company.

請英文高手幫我改得通順一點,或是糾正我文法的錯誤

謝謝。

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    我保留你的意似, ( ) 是修改的地方

    Chairman of department

    If I were a chairman of department, I [were learned ](would learn)

    how to enhance my leadership and be able to[ leading ](lead) my staffs more efficiently.

    For me, a good chairman needs to have a good leading ability to deal with their ( his/her) work. For example, a good manager is not necessary to show their ( his/her) working skills but leadership. Moreover, the operation of company is always base on a group of people [and never one person] ( but not just one person) , so[ the leading way] ( the way of leading) is a key point which decides company’s profit and loss.

    In a word, a good chairman should have sufficient leadership to lead their ( his/her) team

    and ( be) able to produce some positive achievement for the company.

    Source(s): Jenny from the USA
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  • 1 decade ago

    is based on,base 改為based

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