悠哉 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文高手幫我修改這篇文章~! 很急著要~!

topic : A person you admire

我寫的內容~

Someone has their own admire, but someone does not have. I do not have every admire anyone, but I have a little admire my mother. She is a man of principle, sensible, and liberal. She does not like common parent that away adherence to assertion of their rights, furthermore they does not understand that how is their kid think about, and does not communicate with their kid, besides they do not tolerate their kid fashionable things.

When I had trouble or important things, I usually discussed with her. She always careful and attentive to listen, moreover, and then she give me some comment or help me to finish the thing. However, she will very stern correct me when I fault. In addition, sometime I am going to shopping with her, because I would like ask her comment, and she will remind me that do not waste my money.

It is not easy that a parent would like to share their mind, joy, and sad with their kid. Therefore, Thanks to God that I have a liberal mother. She is a good role model for me, so I wish that I am like my mother.

主要文章的意思~

有的人有敬佩的對象,有的人沒有。我沒有很敬佩的什麼人,但是有一個有點敬佩的人,是我媽媽。

我媽媽是個有原則、很明理和開放的人;因為她不會像一般的父母一樣,總是堅持自己的意見不管是否合理的,不了解小孩在表達些什麼也不跟小孩溝通,而且不接受小孩的流行的事物。

通常我遇到一些很煩惱、很重要的事,我都會找她一起討論;她每次都會很仔細的了解我在說些什麼,然後給我一些意見或是幫助我完成這件事,但是我如果做錯事或做錯決定,他會很嚴厲的糾正我。 另外,有時候去逛街買東西的時候,我也會找她一起去給我一些意見,而且也可以阻止我亂花錢。

一個父母要和自己的小孩一起分享他們的想法是很不簡單的,所以很高興我有一個很明理又開放的媽媽。 希望以她作為榜樣,可以像她一樣。

如果有錯的地方起幫我翻一下(要正確的答案) 只要意思有到就好了~!

麻煩高手幫幫忙我 很急著要答案 =v=|||

麻煩你們了~!!! 感恩啦~! ~^.^~

PS. 請不要給我翻譯軟體的版本,謝謝~!

Update:

哈哈~ 一v一|||

我的中文只是大概打而已~

請別建議整個內容很怪~

其實...因為真的沒有什麼崇拜的人所以只好稍微掰一下了... ˊ~ˋ|||

就因為這樣子...才會需要大大們的幫忙呀~~ >.

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  • 楊妞
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    Someone has their own admire, but someone does not have. I do not really admire anyone. But if I have to choose one, that one is my mother. She is sensible and liberal. She is not like those parents who always insist their opinions whatever they are reasonable or not, who never try to understand their kids, who don’t communicate with their kid, and who don’t accept fashion that their children like.

    I can discuss with my mother when I meet any trouble. I can ask her opinion on important things. She always pays her attention to listen and understand what I want or what I need. She also provides some comment or helps me to finish the things. In another way, she will correct me if I make some mistakes. We go shopping together sometimes. She gives me some advices on spending mother. She reminds me not to waste my money.

    It is not easy that a parent is willing to share their mind, joy, and sadness with their kid. Therefore, thanks to God that I have a liberal mother. She is a good role model for me, so I wish that I can be a good mother as her when I become a parent in the future.

  • 1 decade ago

    Some people have their icons, while others don't. I admire nobody but my mother. She is a person with her own theoroms and shows great wisdom in what she said. She is not like the parents who always enforce their own thoughts if they're right, misunderstand what the children want to say, have no communication between kids and themselves, even reject to accept the trendy things.

    When I come across obstacles, I usually turn to her for help. She always listens to me carefully and gives me a piece of advice, even helps me finish the whole thing. However, if I make mistakes, she will correct me severely. In addition, I sometimes ask her to go shopping with me because she can suggest me and stop me from wasting money.

    It is not easy for parents to share what they think with their kids. Therefore, I'm glad that I have so great a mom. She is a good role model, and I hope that I will also be a great person like her.

    嗯嗯我只是用我自己的程度改一下...

    雖然是沒很好啦可能會有些錯誤

    可是這樣問題比較少=目

    我沒有惡意不過你的中文翻譯也怪怪的....

    什麼叫有點敬佩的人?

    還有爸媽在唸人罵人的時候不就是分享想法嗎...哈哈哈XD

    只是方式比較特別嗯....

    希望有幫到你:D.

    Source(s): myself
  • 1 decade ago

    你寫的:Someone has their own admire, but someone does not have. I do not have every admire anyone, but I have a little admire my mother.

    我只有看第一句

    我覺得你的 do not have 和 does not have 改成 dont have 和 doesnt have 會比較好喔!!

    I do not have every admire anyone, but I have a little admire my mother. 你這句我幫你改成 I dont have any special idol,but there is a person i only admire for。That is my mom。

    順便跟你說一下

    admire是動詞。 崇拜 的意思

    希望有幫到妳!!

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