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we have solve out that the problem when menufacturing process, and the 2" seatbelt buckle will be finished at recently.

我們以解決生產過程產生的問題,近日將完成

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  • 1 decade ago
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    原文:

    we have solve out that the problem when menufacturing process, and the 2" seatbelt buckle will be finished at recently.

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    建議:

    用[which]的用法可將語句精簡化

    [and the 2" seatbelt buckle] 這段可以省略 意思不會變 更精簡

    [at recently] 是比較基礎的寫法 而一般可省[at] 後 把[recently]提至當句句首

    [be finished ]在這句義可用[complete]較精簡

    還有[we]要大寫喔!!

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    修改後:

    We solve the problem which the production process produces, recently will complete

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    希望我的回答能幫到你唷~

  • 1 decade ago

    We’ve solved the problems in manufacturing process,

    the second seatbelt buckle will be finished within a few days.

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