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I like to play table tennis. Because I can play it indoor, I don't need to go to thepark or the stadium. You can play it oneself when your families are busy,

and you can play it with your friends, too.

Sometimes I play table tennis oneself. I take a board on the table, which is

against at the wall. And then, I can play it oneself. If my brother or sister both

has free time, they'd like to play with me. We put the table and the table in the

center of the room. And then, we can play with each other.

Table tennis is easier than baseball because we need 10 people to play the

baseball. But, 2 people are at most to play table tennis. And the rule is easier

than baseball. We only need two table tennis stick and a ball, but we need a

ball, a baseball bat, four bases, and a big open ground when we play baseball.

Also, we cannot play baseball when it rain, but we can play the ping pong when

it rain because we can play it indoor.

We serve the ball with the ping-pong stick. The ball must bounce to your

table and your opponent's table. If the ball did't bounce, and that means you

lose. After you serve the ball, you don’t need to bounce it on your table,

just hit it to the opponent's table. We finish the game when a person gets 11

points or 21 points. However, if your score is 10:10 or 11:10, the game still

continued. You have to get two more points, like 11:9 or 12:10.

I can play table-tennis enjoy fully when I exercise with this sport. My mom

works in home. However, she can't take me to go outside in the weekends

because she's too busy. If I play it indoor, I can get some exercise, and she

doesn't need to worry about me. Therefore, I like to play table-tennis.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I like to play table tennis because I can play it indoors. I don't need to go to the park or the stadium to play it . You can play it by yourself or you can play it with your friends when your families are busy.

    Sometimes I play table tennis by myself . I erect one of the two tables against the wall. And then, I can play it by myself . If my brother or sister has free time, they'd like to play with me. We put the table at the center of the room. And then, we can play with each other.

    Table tennis is easier than baseball to play . We need 10 people to play baseball but we need only 2 people to play table tennis. And the rules of table tennis are easier than those of baseball.And to play table tennis we only need two rackets, a ball and a pair of tables,but we need a ball, a baseball bat,many gloves, four bases, and a big open ground to play baseball. Also,when it rains, we cannot play baseball but we can play the ping pong indoors.

    We serve the ball with a ping-pong racket . The ball must bounce to and fro on each table on both sides of the net.If the ball did't bounce,that means someone lose that ball . After you serve the ball, you don't need to hit the ball to bounce once on your table as when you serve ball , just hit it to the opponent's table. We finish the game when a person gets 11 points(or 21 points) . However, if your score ratio is10:10 ,then you have to get two more points as12:10 to win.

    Because my mom must work at home, she can't take me to play outsides on weekends. If I play table tennis indoors,not only can I get some exercises,but she could busy in her work without worrying about me. Therefore, I enjoy playing table-tennis very much .

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    2009-11-22 15:09:46 補充:

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  • chen
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

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    The table tennis I lke,because of playing it in the door.

    However, I isn't need to go to the park and the stadium.

    You can play it yourself when your families are busy,

    but also, play it with your frients too.

    Playing table tennis, something I take a boad myself on the table ,

    ...in which I can play it beating against the wall.

    If my brother or sister, each one of them has free time that they would

    ....like to play with me.

    We put a table in the center of my room, and then

    .....we can play it each other.

    Table tennis is easier than baseball

    ...because the baseball need 10 people to play

    But, 2 people are at most to play table tennis only.

    And the rule is easier than baseball.

    We only need two table tennis stick and a ball, but in the opposite,

    .... we need a ball, a baseball bat, four bases, and

    .....a big open ground when we play baseball.

    Also, we cannot play baseball when it rain, but we can play

    the ping pong when it also rain because we can play it in door.

    We serve the ball with the ping-pong stick. The ball must bounce to your

    table and your opponent's table. If the ball didn't bounce, and that means you lose.

    . After you serve the ball, you don’t need to bounce it

    .....on your table, just hit it to the opponent's table.

    We finish the game when a person gets 11 points or 21 points.

    However, if your score is 10:10 or 11:10, the game still continued.

    You have to get two more points, like 11:9 or 12:10.

    I can play table-tennis enjoy fully when I exercise with this sport.

    My mom works in home. However, she can't take me to go outside

    ....in the weekends because she is too busy.

    If I play it in door, I can get some exercise,

    ...and she does't need to worry about me.

    Therefore, I like to play table-tennis.

    感恩!!

  • 1 decade ago

    I like to play table tennis. Because I can play it indoor, I don't need to go to the park or the stadium. You can play it on your own when your family members are busy, and you can play it with your friends too.

    Sometimes I play table tennis by myself. I take a board on the table, which is

    against the wall. And then, I can start playing. If both my brother and sister are free, then they would play with me. We put the table in the

    center of the room. And then, we can play with each other.

    Table tennis is easier than baseball because baseball requires10 people to start game. But table tennis only requires a maximum of 2 players. And the rules are easier than baseball. We only need two table tennis rackets and a ball. On the other hand, we need baseball bats, 4 bases, and a larger ground area to start baseball game.

    Also, we cannot play baseball when it rains. For table tennis, it doesn't affect us much despite the bad weather, since we play it indoor.

    We serve the ball with the table tennis racket. The ball must bounce to your

    table and your opponent's table. If the ball did't bounce, that means you

    lose. After you served the ball, you don't need to bounce it on your table,

    just hit it to the opponent's table. We finish the game when a person gets 11

    points or 21 points. However, if your score is 10:10 or 11:10, the game

    continues. You have to get two more points, like 11:9 or 12:10.

    I enjoy table tennis whenever I play it. My mum works at home. However, she can't take me out during weekends because she's too busy. If I play it indoor, I can get some exercise, and she doesn't need to worry about me. Therefore, I like to play table tennis.

    希望有所幫助!^^

    Source(s): 自己
  • cheng
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    I like to play table tennis. Because I can play it indoor, I don’t need to go to the park or the stadium. You can play it yourself when your families are busy, and you can play it with your friends, too.

    Sometimes I play table tennis myself. I take a board on the table and lay it against at the wall. And then, I can play it myself. When my brother or sister both have free time, they’d like to play with me. We set the table in the center of the room. And then, we can play with each other.

    Table tennis is easier than baseball because we need 10 people to play the baseball. But, only 2 players are required for this sport. Moreover the rules are easier than baseball's. We just need two table tennis sticks and a ball, but we need a ball, a bat, four bases, and a big open ground when we play baseball.

    Also, we cannot play baseball when it rains. However, we can play the ping pong when it rains because we can play it indoor.

    We serve the ball with the ping-pong stick. The ball must bounce to your table and your opponent’s side. If the ball doesn’t bounce, and that means you lose a point. After you serve the ball, you don’t need to bounce it on your table, just hit it to the opponent’s side. We finish the game when a person gains 11 points or 21 points. However, if the score is 10:10 or 11:10, the game will continue. You have to gain two more points, like 11:9 or 12:10.

    I can play table tennis enjoyably when I exercise with this sport. My mom works at home. However, she can’t take me out on the weekends because she’s too busy. If I play it indoor, I can at least get some exercises, and she doesn’t need to worry about me as well. Therefore, I like to play table tennis.

    I hope you like it!!!!

    Source(s): myself
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