麻煩幫看看面試的英文自介,有無文法錯誤

以下是我面試準備用的英文自介,希望有英文不錯的高手能幫我看看,有無文法上的錯誤,感謝~^^~ My name is xxx I was born in xx I am graduated from National Taipei University of Technology last year I major in Chemical Engineering There are five members in my family My father and the younger sister are government officers My mother manages a breakfast... show more 以下是我面試準備用的英文自介,希望有英文不錯的高手能幫我看看,有無文法上的錯誤,...
My name is xxx
I was born in xx
I am graduated from National Taipei University of Technology last year
I major in Chemical Engineering
There are five members in my family
My father and the younger sister are government officers
My mother manages a breakfast shop
I am easygoing ,optimistic and patient
My interest is diverse, beside play a ball game ,mountain climbing and go to a movies .
when I have the long vacation ,I like to travel
I am active and responsible at work
I believe I can be equal to this job by the personality and the professional
That is my introduction. Thanks
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