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In opening, I’d like to present a fascinating architectural heritage I am very fond of, - Tainan Confusian Temple .

Apparently, according to its name, the temple is located in Tainan City . From my perspective, it is a symbol of Chinese educational culture, and is yet still profound to the modern Taiwanese society.

Confusian Temple , built in Ming Dynasty around the 17th century, is the best historical preservation in Tainan for its great structure and traditional heritage by now

It is interesting to note that you can see a famous stone in the entrance of the temple, inscribed "all" officials, Soldiers, and Civilians off the Horse”, which means that everyone have to pay their respect to Confucius.

You also can see that the temple and a school are located side by side facing the front yard. I feel it is very interesting that the greatest teacher has elementary school pupils as being neighbor.

In closing, Confucius philosophy significantly affects Chinese societies, and Confusian Temple is the most beautiful ancient architecture I have ever seen.

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    I’d like to present a fascinating architectural heritage that I am very fond of, the Tainan Confucian Temple.

    (不知道是文章還是講稿,可其實無論如何用 In the opening做為開端都有些多餘,因為I’d like to….這句就已經告訴讀者/聽眾這是個開始了。)

    Confucian 中間是c喔

    Apparently, according to its name, the temple is located in Tainan City. From my perspective, it symbolizes the Chinese educational culture, which is still profound in the modern Taiwanese society.

    (要用 yet still profound 一般在 yet 之前有另一個形容詞或者跟profound類似用法的辭彙,像是 easy yet still healthy 這樣的用法,中文來說應該類似「華麗而又不失實用」這樣的結構。)

    Confucian Temple, built in the Ming Dynasty around the 17th century, is the best preserved historical site in Tainan since its structure remains in great condition; so does the traditional heritage it carries.

    (最後一部分的句子我想您應該是想表達「孔廟是台南保存最完善的一個歷史遺跡,因為其無論結構或流傳下來的傳統都保存的很好」的意思。)

    另外 historical preservation 是歷史維護,但如果要說「維護的最好的XXX」該用 best preserved XXX這樣的寫法。

    It is interesting to note that you can see a famous stele by the entrance of the temple, which “…orders all visitors, however important, to get off their horses or climb out of their palanquins, and enter the grounds on foot in order to show proper respect for Confucius.”

    (“”中內容取自http://www.chinapost.com.tw/travel/taiwan-central/...

    (個人沒去過孔廟所以不清楚,但連結裡的內容寫了是石板,而且已經翻譯了石板上內容的作用,所以直接擷取。)

    You can also see that a school is located side by side with the temple, both facing the front yard. I think it is very interesting that it portrays the greatest teacher with school pupils as his neighbors.

    (不太確定版主是否想表達您「認為最偉大的教師與學童比鄰的畫面非常有趣」這個意思?)

    In conclusion, Confucian philosophy significantly affected the Chinese society, and the Confucian Temple is the most beautiful ancient architecture that I have ever seen.

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