瓛翔 asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

英文自我介紹

請英語能力強的大大們~

能幫我看看我的英文自我介紹~

能幫我稍稍的修飾一下嗎?~~

THX!

Hi Everyone. My name is Vic.

I am an eighth grader in Cheng Kung junior high school.

I study in class 805. I am fourteen years old.

I like to singing songs,but I love listening to music more.

In my mind,I believe that I should listen to others music and songs

if I want to sing songs that can move people by heart.

During listening to others music and songs,

I am able to discover their strong points and improve my weakness.

Then,I will stand on the stage,

show my music to people and be a great singer.

Therefore,I have to learn harder and harder to reach my good.

There are four members in my family.

I am a youngest child.I have a sister,

who is in the third year of the college in Taipei.

We have very good relationship. she is nice to me.

When she has time on Sunday,she likes to take me out.

Besides,she also comforts me when I feel sad and often talks about life to me.

As to my mom,she usually reminds me what I should.

Though she chatters a lot,I feel warm because I knows she really cares about me.

My father is a careful person but sometimes he is a bit careless.

However,he is the best dad in the world. He is my idol.

I am so happy to have the best sister and mom,too.

I am a lucky person That’s all my self-introduction.

I hope everyone knows me more now.

Thank you for your listening.

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  • Ruut
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Vic.

    I'm an 8th grade student in class 805 at Cheng Kung junior high school.

    I'm 14 years old and I'm the youngest in my family.My family consists my parents, my sister and myself.

    My sister is currently a junior in a college in Taipei. It's very kind of her to take me out for a walk on Sundays and conforts me whenever I feel very sad. She's been very nice to me.

    My mother always chatters a lot to remind me of what I should do, which

    makes me feel warm and loving.She really card of me.

    My father is often very careful, except for some unexpected events.He is the best dad in the world.He is my hero.

    With the best family members, I'm the luckest one in the world.

    I enjoy singing and listening to music. Though I have such interests, listening to music is what I like most. Because listening to various kinds of music helps my singing to touch my audience deeply. By doing that I can improve my vocal skill and make up for my weakness. I must keep on practicing singing regularly so that one day I can perform my music on the stage in public. My ambitiou is to be a great singer one day.

    Finally, I hope I can become your friend. Thank you very much.

    2009-11-10 17:33:31 補充:

    更正: Confort ----> Comfort (第二段第2行)

    另外 junior可指大三生 補充: freshman-->大一生 sophomore--> 大二生 senior--> 大三生

    Source(s): My bilingual experience and I refuse to use any translation software.
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