help me 改以下自薦信...thx~
My name isxxx. I am eleven years old . I shall be graduated in July this academic year at Hoi Ping Chamber of Commerce Primary School. My favorite subject is English. I love learning English because it can make me fun.
I am active in extra-curricular activities. I am a member of the school hand-bell team and Chinese painting class. In addition to playing the piano, I enjoy painting because I like art. My favorite painter is Monet. I think his pictures are colourful and fascinating. One of his master pieces is called Camille. The woman in the long green dress was his wife. I like that picture best.
I know that the academic atmosphere of learning in your school is excellent and the students have many chances to work by themselves. Your teachers are patient and kind too. Moreover, there are lots of extra-curricular activities. I believe I will enjoy my study and the activities at your school.
I want to be a student of your school and I will try my best to be an outstanding student. I hope you will give me a chance to achieve my goal.
I will be most appreciated if you accept me to study at your school.
素仰 貴校校風純樸，師資優良，學生品學俱佳。隨函附上個人簡歷乙份，敬請察閱。 如蒙 提拔，定當悉力以赴，不負所期。
- PakLv 61 decade agoFavorite Answer
name is Xiaoling Chen, a sixth-grade student of Hoi Ping Chamber of
Commerce Primary School with graduation scheduled in July 2010, who
write in application for admission in your esteemed college.
believe my engagement in a multitude of extra-curricular activities
will prove my all-round personality. Aside from participation in Girl
Scouts and the basketball team, I have volunteered as the librarian
and class prefect. Academically, I have attended the Math Olympiad
Competition on behalf of my school and achieved satisfactory results.
my aspiration to pursue my study in your college with a unique
culture conductive to lifelong learning and personal growth, which
definitely lays the stepping stone for my success in university
admission. I have attached my resume for your reference and yours
acceptance is much appreciated.
2009-11-15 15:52:47 補充：
沒有就英文段每個項目重提。Source(s): , 請見諒
- 1 decade ago