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Daisy asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

an impotent rose for BG..................c/c?

My garden blooms abundantly

Astor, Jonquille, Zephyranth,

Yet bare remains the Cinquefoil

Whose buds drop wilted 'pon the path

With treat I tend the fertile soil

Swift fingertips pluck out the weed

Yet bare remains the Cinquefoil

Though blooms I grow from other seed

The Cinquefoil is lover's rose

Though blooms not large nor scarlet red

Where I attend Adonis grows

I fear my lover's rose is dead

With scissors sharp I prune the Rue

Dead leaf from stem I separate

Yet bare remains the Cinquefoil

Perhaps my love arises late

Oh sorrow sorrow hear me weep

So empty and forlorn the vine

The Willow's tears are mine to keep

For lover's rose no longer mine

September settles blooms decay

The Marigold and Daffodil

All wither wilt and fade away

Except the rose, which never will

Yet bare remains the Cinquefoil

No bloom a-rose to bid adieu

Though fertile fed and rich the soil

I will not see my lover's bloom





Update 2:

nuuuuuuuu TD's are from me

8 Answers

  • .
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Where was my brain? And the part of my brain that is slightly smudged and dirty? LOL

    Still, it is one of the best things I've read - easily comparable to Emily Dickenson, E. B. Browning...

    This needs a book around it, Girlie!

    Source(s): Edit: HH - they got stuff for that nowadays. Bet Buk would loan ya some til ya got yer own. (wipes actual wet tears of laughter)
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  • erlene
    Lv 4
    3 years ago

    Ah! the two one in each of my prominent bands... i'm in simple terms going to grant the sting to weapons N' Roses by using fact all the unique individuals are nevertheless alive, and that they should in simple terms reunite already. yet, you may no longer evaluate Nirvana and GNR, as they're 2 thoroughly distinctive bands. And, for the final time, weapons N' Roses are no longer a hair band!!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Wow, I am emotional over this.

    *wipes his dry eyes*

    Just something I caught in it, don't worry.

    Thanks a lot.

    Here is to all those who have lost one they loved to the early frost.

    (Silent prayer.)

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  • Joe K
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Nice poem, but the 5th stanza is Magic .. I'm singin' it!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    how we are want to forget

    but the rose is not without thorn

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's... really beautiful

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  • 1 decade ago

    boom boom


    song of song of


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  • 1 decade ago

    is my name daffodil?

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