小可憐 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

[英文短文]能否幫我檢查我的文法?(急用20點@@)

主題是團隊合作

能否幫我檢查一下有沒有哪裡有文法或者拼字上的錯誤?

感謝撥冗回答~

Teamwork

The ability to cooperate with others to accomplish a task is an important skill. It’s usually more smoothly to complete a project by teamwork than work by oneself. By observing the history, we can notice that almost every successful example is working, studying and researching in group.

If we work by single, we may face many problems by ourselves, and that’s really a big pressure. Teamwork is a good way to solve this problem. For example, every partner in our team can take care of one part of all the work so that everyone’s workload will be much less than all work by one. It’s very efficient, time-saving and dependable. On the other hand, we can also improve our friendships between our teammates by solving problems together.

Is there any problem we would face when we work in team? Unfortunately, yes. Sometimes we’ll argue for different suggestions, sometimes we’ll get angry during discussing, and sometimes we’ll complain about that the quantity of the part we work is really unfair. It’s quite not easy to keep a team working perfectly, but maybe a good team leader can handle it very well. An intelligent leader should know every partner’s ability, strong point and weakness. A leader should also need to be skillful and fair in dividing the amount of task for everyone. The best leader should know the best way to make their team become the best.

Team work ability is important in our life. We should practice more about this useful skill so that we could face more problems in the unknown and dangerous future by working together with pleasure.

Update:

糟糕

我貼的時候有空格說

貼出來空行不見了= =

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Teamwork

    The ability to cooperate with others to accomplish a task is an important skill. It's usually more easy to complete a project by teamwork than by oneself. By reviewing history, we can notice that almost every big poject,whether it is working, studying and researching,is done in group.

    If we work by ourselves, we may face many problems. Teamwork is a good way to solve problems.Every team member can take care of his part of the work so that everyone's workload will be much less than all by oneself.

    Teamwork is very efficient and dependable. In addition, we can also improve friendships between teammates by solving problems together.

    Is there any problem we would face when we work in team? Unfortunately, yes. Sometimes we'll argue for different suggestions,get angry during discussion, and complain about unfair workload. It's not easy to keep a team working together perfectly, but a good team leader can handle it well. An intelligent leader should know every partner's ability, both strengths and weaknesses and should be skillful and fair in dividing the amount of task between team members. The best leader should know how to make their team become the best.

    Team work ability is important for us. We should practice more of this useful skill so that we could deal with problems arising in the unknown future by working together with pleasure.

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