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Dear sir ,

I am a student at Massey University. I have hired a house for my

accommodation ,however, someone planted a tree nearby the house. Therefore, I am writing this letter to express my complain to you and also I wish that you could solve this problem.

I live at no.25 Hardiet Street , my problem involves the following two aspects. Firstly, the sunlight is very difficult round the house because of the tree is extremely big. Secondly,

I make a detour to avoid the tree every day. During this time, I felt unhappy because it is inconvenient .I think that the above two aspects are the main problems with accommodation.

If you can assign someone to investigate the matter, I would appreciate you deeply. I am also want to inquire about relevant expenses.

I hope that you can attend to this matter as soon as possible.

Your sincerely ,

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    Dear sir ,

    I am a student at Massey University. I have hired(A) a house for my

    accommodation ,however, someone planted a tree nearby the house. Therefore, I am writing this letter to express my complain(B) to you and also I (C )wish that you could solve this problem (D).

    I live at no.25 Hardiet Street , my problem involves the following two aspects. Firstly, the sunlight is very difficult (E )round the house because of(F) the tree is extremely big. Secondly, I make a detour to avoid the tree every day. During this time, I felt unhappy because it is inconvenient .I think that the above two aspects(G) are the main problems with accommodation.

    If you can assign someone to investigate (H)the matter, I would appreciate you(I) deeply. I am(J) also want to inquire about relevant expenses.

    I hope that you can attend to this matter as soon as possible.

    Your sincerely ,

    A -你是要說租嗎? rent

    B- complaint

    C- also I 可省略

    D- resolve this matter

    E - dim/scarce around the house

    F - 刪除 of

    G- above two aspects >> two mentioned above

    H- investigate >> look into

    I- you >> it

    J - 刪除 am

    另外你有幾句重復的意思, 建議留下一個就好

    Good luck

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