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My playing baseball experience

In my junior high 1th,through the television I was fascinated with playing baseball.

I remembered that my first time played with friends , I hit a two base 安打.

Since then , baseball become my favorite sport until now.

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My experience of playing baseball

In first year in junior high school, I was fascinated with playing baseball through television.

I remembered that the first time when I played baseball with friends ,I hit a two base hit.

Update 2:

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And our team win this game in the end.

Since then , baseball has become my favorite exercise.

Until now , I always go to baseball with my friends in my leisure times.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    1.一壘安打-one- base hit

    2.二壘安打-two- base hit

    3.三壘安打-three- base hit

    4.全壘打-home run / homer

    My experience of playing baseball

    In first year in junior high, I was fascinated with baseball.

    I remembered that the first time when I played baseball with friends ,I hit a two base hit.

    Since then , baseball has become my favorite exercise.

    2009-11-04 19:13:38 補充:

    My experience of playing baseball

    In first year in junior high school, I was fascinated with baseball through television.

    I remembered that the first time when I played baseball with friends ,I hit a two base hit.

    with baseball 就好!

    through television如果要加上去的話!! because of the baseball match on the TV.

    2009-11-04 19:13:44 補充:

    And in the end our team won this game.

    Since then , baseball has become my favorite exercise.

    Therefore,now I always play baseball with my friends in my leisure time.

    如果用until now 是表示之前有 一直到到現在 而以後就停止了!!

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  • 1 decade ago

    保留原文,只對文法做修改::

    My Baseball Playing(Baseball-Playing) Experience

    In the 7th grade, I was fascinated with playing baseball through television.

    I remembered that my first time playing with friends , I hit a double。

    Since then, baseball became my favorite sport.

    在美國,小學=1年級~5年級,初中=6年級~8年級,高中= 9年級~12年級

    臺灣初一以年份算是美國的初二(7年級)

    Since 已經包括until now 的意思

    下列寫法供你參考:

    I became fascinated with playing baseball through television (wen I was)in the 7th grade.

    I remember hitting a double the first time I played with my friends., and baseball has been my favorite sport ever since.

    2009-10-28 06:51:02 補充:

    1.一壘安打-one- base hit(single)

    2.二壘安打-two- base hit (double)

    3.三壘安打-three- base hit (triple)

    4.全壘打-home run / homer

    ()內為棒球術語, 兩者皆為正確

    滿壘全壘-grand slam

    再見全壘打- walk-off home-run

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