強森 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我改一下我的開頭句

我想要寫一篇觀於棒球的介紹,這是我的開頭,如果有很明顯的錯誤請幫我更正依下,

感恩

I love baseball since I watched Athens Olympic game of baseball in 2004. I became a baseball fan and started to study it, I found that baseball is not as simple as just pitching and hitting only. It contains the meaning of every single hitting and pitching that player made.

Update:

I found that baseball is not as simple as just hit and ball sport?

這樣可以嗎?

2 Answers

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  • nung
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I have been in love with baseball since I watched the Olympic game of baseball at Athens in 2004. I became an avid baseball fan and started to study it, I found that baseball game is far more than just pitching and hitting the balls only. Behind every move of hitting or pitching, there is the whole state-of-the-art skills and experience of the players.

  • 1 decade ago

    ohyea

    完全正確

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