Nepail
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Nepail asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我潤飾或訂正黑字的英文翻譯2

The spirit walked slowly backwards to the window, which began to open.

鬼魂慢慢的往後走向開始打開的窗戶。

When the ghost reached the window, it held up its hand, and Scrooge listened.

當鬼魂到達窗戶,舉起了手

He could hear a noise of sad crying in the air.

Scrooge可以聽到在空中的悲傷的哭泣聲。

The spirit began to cry, too, and it moved out into the frosty, dark night to join the others.

鬼魂也開始哭泣,然後加入到寒冷又黑暗的夜晚一起哭泣

Scrooge ran to the window.

Scrooge跑向窗戶

Outside, the air was full of spirits, all wearing chains like Marley's ghost, all crying miserably as they realized, too late, the terrible mistakes that they had made in their lives.

外面的天空充滿許多的鬼魂,全部都戴著像Marley鬼身上的枷鎖,他們都為太晚發現自己生命中的錯誤而哭泣。

*有些地方我翻的怪怪的,歡迎英文高手幫忙修改或訂正

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  • SKIITE
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    The spirit walked slowly backwards to the window, which began to open.

    鬼魂慢慢的往後走向開始打開的窗戶。

    When the ghost reached the window, it held up its hand, and Scrooge listened.

    當鬼魂走到窗邊,它舉起了手,而Scrooge聽著

    He could hear a noise of sad crying in the air.

    Scrooge可以聽到在空氣中的悲傷的哭泣聲。

    The spirit began to cry, too, and it moved out into the frosty, dark night to join the others.

    鬼魂也開始哭泣,然後加入(去掉"到")寒冷又黑暗的夜晚一起哭泣

    Scrooge ran to the window.

    Scrooge跑向窗戶

    Outside,

    the air was full of spirits, all wearing chains like Marley's ghost,

    all crying miserably as they realized, too late, the terrible mistakes

    that they had made in their lives.

    外面的天空充滿許多的鬼魂,全部都戴著像Marley鬼身上的枷鎖,他們都為太晚發現自己生命中的錯誤而哭泣。

    您翻的其實已經很棒了^_^

    希望幫到

    Source(s): 自己
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