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I graduated from xx University in xx. My major is Department of International Business , it is as well known as Customs Clearance, exchange and the practicum of International trade . No matter from management, such as international transportation practicum skill and ability, understands about Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation. Department of International Business is an extensive domain.

In 2008, I joined distribution center of xx Corporation as a Sales Assistant. My work was responsible for order handle, to communicate with our department and let our foreign customer satisfied to receive the product. From this job, I learned a lot of things and became more mature to deal with difficult works.

請英文高手幫我看一下這兩段這樣寫是否ok，拜託了，謝謝。

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I graduated from xx University in xx with a major in international business , which covers the areas of customs clearance, exchange and practice of international trade, skill and ability of management in international transportation, and keen understanding of Asia-Pacific economic cooperation.

In 2008, I joined the distribution center of xx Corporation as a sales assistant. I was responsible for order handling, and to communicate with our foreign customers to ensure that they were satisfied with the shipped products. It has been a learning experience for me , from which I gained much knowledge of my profession and have become much more matured in dealing with challenges in my work.

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