Im 13 and i want to be a righter tell me what u think of my sampel?
“I’m sca-“I stopped. “You’re what?” My mom said looking puzzled. “I’m… tiered of being in this car when do we get to get out!?”
“Sweaty we” she stopped. “We all know you want to get out I’m sere so does your sister.” I looked over at my sister with both ear phones in her ears and texting one (or more) of her friends.
I looked back out the window I saw the constructer workers by the road. Then a few seconds later the road went from bumpy to smooth. I didn’t feel like we were driving anymore. “Where’s dad” I said to quietly so no one could hear me. “what did you say sweaty.” I guess she heard me. “Where is dad?”
“He had to stop and tighten the rope for the coach” she said looking mad. “Oh”
I looked out the window hoping we where almost there. “Are we” I as