Can you tell me what you think about this song I just wrote?

I just wrote it, its about something very personal which i bet you can guess after reading it. tell me what you think!

So you think

I don't know what you're saying

Cuz he doesn't know he exists

He doesn't believe you'll hurt him like this

I'm so mad I don't know what to say

The words won't come out either way

It's not my fault you won't tell him

I'm not the one who will break him

So I'm giving you the chance to now

So tell him what you said

Tell him all the lies

Tell him about the man

Who's on the other end

Make sure he cries

Cuz I know that's what you wanted

Make sure he knows

What you've never forgotten

Just make sure you tell him

About the man on the other end

Just imagine

I will never tell him

You keep living this lie

You can keep sneaking with this guy

I'm so tired of all of this fighting

This is just because you want to

It's not my fault you've been becoming

Someone I'll never remember

Why don't you let him know

So tell him what you said

Tell him all the lies

Tell him about the man

Who's on the other end

Make sure he cries

Cuz I know that's what you wanted

Make sure he knows

What you've never forgotten

Just make sure you tell him

About the man on the other end

I know you would leave

Even if he didn't ask you too

Cuz I know you don't really care about us (Do you?)

You've already had your mind set

All you wanna do

All you wanna do

All you wanna do

Is not think about back then

Lets just think about ben? Oh

Tell him what you've said

Tell him all the lies

Tell him about ben

Who's on the other end

Make sure dad cries

Cuz I know that's what you wanted

Make sure he knows

What you've never forgotten

Just make sure you tell him

About the man on the other end

(Ben, Ben, oh, Ben, Ben)

THANX! :D

Update:

this song isnt' about me sneaking around its about my mom!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I like it, I definitely feel what you're saying in this song, and that you feel really strongly about it. Great work, I really love the rhymes!! <3

  • 1 decade ago

    To be Honest you'r Song has alot of Mystery Stuff

    For Example i read the first section and i'm trying to make the tone of you'r song in my head,i thought you were talking about a dear friend of you'rs who got really hurt,i think that friend is you

    You was really Strange in Chapter 2,Cus u kept saying Tell Him to know about a Secret,You was Advising you'r Self in this song

    Awesome Lyrice and i cant wait that u Puplished it,Hopefull you will

    Sorry if i took too long to answer

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that is really good. i really like it.

    the only part i dont really get is when you say "make sure dad cries" and that kind of confuses me like are you sneaking around with a guy your dad doesnt want you to be with? or are you just cheating on a guy? oh well either way it is a really good song keep up the good work

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Great lyrics would love to hear the tune.

    High 5

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  • 1 decade ago

    wow, ah-mazing, great job! yea, u should put it on youtube and put the link on here, i bet it sounds amazing. u have definitely written it from the heart, perfect :)

    ~Tia

  • 1 decade ago

    that sounds cool i like the rhyming wish i could hear the tune try sing it on youtube, thanks

  • 1 decade ago

    straight up sucks. just sayin.

  • 1 decade ago

    awesome!!! i love it, could you tell us how the tune goes?

  • 1 decade ago

    awesome. hope i can hear it one day!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    OMGGGG THAT IS SOOOOOO GOOOD!!!

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