what do you think of this?

it's kind of holloween base.(thats favorite holiday.next to christmas of course!)

the door is open

so you walk out

to look at the stars

and stalk about.

the moon is shining

bright and clear

to stop you in your tracks

and stir up your fears

you keep walking for you have strong will.

a fog begins to swirl

your uneasy so you twirl

as you hear

the whowl of the wind

or somthing else queer

you start to jog

and then to run

wishing for the shining sun

you trip and fall over a rock

you get back up to see

that your in the middel of a cemetary

a hand reaches out

from the grimy soil

makes your stomach

bubble and boil

more and more hands appear

as you scream

showing off your fear

it is to late

for you are caught.

an unfortuante end

to an unfortunate plot.

tell me what you think.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    i really like it! great job!!!

  • 1 decade ago

    Brilliant! I love this ! (:

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