可以幫我訂正英文文法嗎

幫我看看有哪裡錯誤或是可以在加一些什麼。

謝謝!

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開始:

I am going to represent my review of "why learn English?"

I think learning English is very important.

Once, I thought learning English is useless, but this is not so.

To begin with, if I could speaking English, I would go to short-term study in U.S.A, and talking about with American.

whatever, you may think you don't need English now, but who knows? You might need it in future.

Update:

我覺得都回答得很好耶!非常感謝!!

可是因為剛好小牙千大大說的部分都是我要加強的!

所以就把點給小牙千大大囉!

很感謝!

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  • 1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    樓上的回答很好了

    但我還是想把我的留給你做參考

    I am going to represent my review of "why we should learn English?"

    在這你忘了主詞跟助動詞(這是疑問句)

    I think learning English is very important.

    I used to think learning English is useless, but that is not true.

    Once的意思是”有一次”,在這用它會很怪吧

    同樣是”這個” 在大部分的情況下都會用that 不用this

    So只有在口語中的肯定句了會用到 用在否定句裡就怪怪的

    Therefore, if I could speak English, I could go to a short-term study in U.S.A, and talk with others.

    你整個對話都還沒結束也沒結果不會用到”用…..開始”

    在助動詞後面的動詞都是原形的

    你因該是想說可以(could)而不是會(would) 因為你不是學會英文後”就要”去美國 而是”可以”去美國

    忘了冠詞!!!!!(他很煩可是不能忘><)

    And 前後時態要一致

    我的意見是不要說America 因為美國不只有美國人,你會碰到的外國人也會不少

    However, you might think you don't need English now, but who knows? You might need it in the future.

    Whatever比較有”管他的”意思 however才是你要說的吧

    在這用might有比較禮貌的感覺

    冠詞!!!!!!!(真的別忘記他= =)

    Source(s): 自己留學的經驗
  • Louis
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I am going to present my view of "why to learn English."

    Once, I thought learning English is useless, but it is not.

    Now I understand that English is very important.

    If I could speak English, I would be able to go to a short-term study program in the U.S.A. and talk with Americans.

    You might think you don't need English, but who knows? You might need it in the future.

  • Joy
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    如果我是外國人.....我會知道你想要表達的意思

    但因為你要更正自己的文法,我就幫你訂正了

    但是,當你遇到外國人時還是要勇於說話表達自己ㄛ

    I am going to represent my review of "why learn English?"

    ....I am going to express my opinion of "Why we have to learn English?"

    I think learning English is very important....Good!!

    Once, I thought learning English is useless, but this is not so.

    ....I used to think learning English is useless, but it's not like that.

    To begin with, if I could speaking English, I would go to short-term study in U.S.A, and talking about with American.

    ....hum...I am not sure what you tried to say, but here's some modification based on your sentences.

    If I could speak English not so bad, I probably would start with taking a short-term study in America, and to practice my English with those Americans.

    whatever, you may think you don't need English now, but who knows? You might need it in future.

    ...Maybe you thought you don't need to use English right now, but who knows? you may need it in the future.

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