Which song lyrics of mine are better?

both of them have different endings but same intro pretty much and i wanna know which one i should stick with Walking through the smoke I got no more... hope feeling all alone and im feeling cold... Why is no one here why is no one here... Everyone has someone but im just standing here. I try to be cool... show more both of them have different endings but same intro pretty much and i wanna know which one i should stick with

Walking through the smoke
I got no more... hope feeling all alone and im feeling cold...
Why is no one here why is no one here...
Everyone has someone but im just standing here.
I try to be cool with it and I always think im strong
Thinking its ok someone will come along.
Then one night i started thinking about all the times i tried
Then i realized i always had to hide.
Not just girls but from everybody else...
I gotta change now! I gotta change now!
I cant blame everybody i can only blame myself
I have to find happiness it wont find me
You wont be given changes you have to help yourself
Life is weird game better learn how to play
If i dont change now ill never last a day
I better learn how to play better learn how to play
better learn how to play... Then finally the next day came
best day of my life ... met many of people and got a number or...2
I finally climbed the mountain now i have no where to hideeeeee!
So this is what its like this is what its like... to be out of the tunnel and be on the greener side! .... I feel alight i feel alright I have a couple of numbers and a date tonight...yea... I... feel... all... right

the second one now

Walking through the smoke
I got no more... hope feeling all alone and im getting cold...
Why is no one here why is no one here......

Everyone has someone but im just standing here.
I try to be cool with it and I always think im strong
Thinking its ok someone will come along.
Walking through the smoke
I got no more... hope feeling all alone and im feeling cold...
Then one night i started thinking about all the times i tried
Then i realized i always wanted to hide.
Not just girls but from everybody else...
a tear down my face a hole in the wall and a broken... vase
I gotta change now! I gotta change now!
Find the happy days.... change...all of my ways
A tear down my face a tear down my face and a hole in the wall
also a broken vase
every time I see myself in the mirror i can never hide
Im not one to run away im here to stay
to last another day theres gotta be a way
what more can i say
today will be the day
today will be the day
change today and stay away from yesterday
yesterday is a badddd...day
today is the place to be
look at me i can finally see
through the smoke of yesterday
yesterday
cuz today is the place to be today
dont run away just stay away from yesterday
and everything will be...okay
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