At the time that senior high school is grade one，The association that I join is a table tennis，I select table tennis association for My junior high school is a school team and is also my interest，In addition，I still have already attended Olympic road to run a match，The result isn't very good，However，much exercise is very good，The position is of no account，In addition，I still have already joined badminton association，I am to like badminton very much，Is a very good exercise，However，I hope that the university can join a lot of associations。 請大大幫我看這篇文章是否錯誤?????
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3. 一主詞 + 一 動詞 的概念抓準了，很多東西自然就不會有中式英文。 不需要太繁複的想法，簡單精準更重要。
At the time that senior high school is grade one，The association that I join is a table tennis，-->> 建議改成：
When I was grade one in the senior high school, I joined the table tennis club.
I select table tennis association for My junior high school is a school team and is also my interest，->> 建議改成：
The reason I joined the table tennis club was because I had highly interest of table tennis.
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