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孟婕 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

中文翻成英文這樣語法上又錯誤嗎 ?! (急!!!!!!)

放學之後,我和朋友去電影院看電影,片名叫做"絕命終結站4".這部片的故事是在說,男主角可以預言幾位好友一起去看賽車,原本是刺激歡樂的一天,男主角卻預知了可怕的事,他看見一樁空前猛烈的連環車禍,好幾輛高速疾駛的賽車追撞在一起,火球般的碎片飛上看台,導致他和好朋友們都當場慘死,血肉模糊。看完電影,時間也很晚了,所以我和朋友就在電影院附近吃飯,然後坐公車回家,結束了充實的一天。

After school, I and my friends went to the cinema to see movies, titles called the "Final Destination 4." The story of this film is that the actor can be predicted with a few friends to see the car was originally to stimulate the joy of the day , a man is a terrible thing to predict, he saw an unprecedented fierce pile, passing on a good few more high-speed car crashes together, fireball-like debris flew stands, leading to he and his friends have all died on the spot , badly mutilated. Have watched the film, and time is very late, so my friends and I eat in the vicinity of the cinema, and then take the bus home, ending a day of enrichment.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    你不是要問"翻譯"有沒有問題嗎?

    我幫你改一下!

    放學之後,我和朋友去電影院看電影,片名叫做"絕命終結站4".這部片的故事是在說,男主角可以預言幾位好友一起去看賽車,原本是刺激歡樂的一天,男主角卻預知了可怕的事,他看見一樁空前猛烈的連環車禍,好幾輛高速疾駛的賽車追撞在一起,火球般的碎片飛上看台,導致他和好朋友們都當場慘死,血肉模糊。看完電影,時間也很晚了,所以我和朋友就在電影院附近吃飯,然後坐公車回家,結束了充實的一天。

    After school, I and my friends went to the cinema to see movies,

    第一句就有問題:你要說"after school,my friends and I went to the cinema and see a movie"因為要把自己放在最後,還有,要說"see a movie,或是"watch movie"不能說see movies.因為看一場電影,只能用"a movie"來說,cinema後面要用and銜接

    titles called the "Final Destination 4."

    你改成"the title of the movie is "Final Destination 4"才對,不是titles,片名只有一個,不可以加 s,

    The story of this film is that the actor can be predicted with a few friends to see the car was originally to stimulate the joy of the day ,

    你直接說"the movie is talking about the actor can predicted with some friends to watch the car race,originally it's an exciting and joy day,"看賽車是說watch the car race不是用see,要說...(adj.) day,你都用成倒裝句,不是of the day.

    a man is a terrible thing to predict, he saw an unprecedented fierce pile, passing on a good few more high-speed car crashes together, fireball-like debris flew stands, leading to he and his friends have all died on the spot , badly mutilated.

    第一句改成"the actor predicted a terrible thing,he saw an unprecedented fierce pile,passing on a good few more high-speed car crashes tohther,fireball-like debris flew away,leading to his friends and him,they all died with the blood spot,badly mutilated."比較通順,你說"a man"但是應該是指"男主角actor"才對不是嗎?至於其他,還不錯啦!

    Have watched the film, and time is very late, so my friends and I eat in the vicinity of the cinema,

    看完電影不是"have watched the film"這是一句嚴重的錯誤,應該是說"when we had finish the movie,it's very late,so we had dinner near the cinema,"才正確,你一開始就用過去式,後面也是比照辦理,要用had dinner.

    and then take the bus home, ending a day of enrichment.

    也是要用過去式→and then took the bus home,ending an enrichment day.

    希望你滿意

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  • 1 decade ago

    我和朋友去電影院看電影

    1.這句ㄉ「和」應該要用with

    2.只看1部應該不用用「movies」

    movie就可以ㄌ~幫你加了a(1部)

    ^^所以2句合起來是

    I with my friends went to the cinema to see a movie

    不想用線上翻譯機騙你~

    所以...只能說其他不懂

    也懶ㄉ查

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  • 1 decade ago

    After school, me and my friends went to the cinema to watch a movie, the movie is "Final Destination 4." The story of this film is that the actor can be predicted with a few friends to see the car. It was originally to stimulate the joy of the day , but he predicted a terrible thing, he saw an unprecedented fierce pile, passing on more high-speed cars. they crashed all together, fireball-like debris flew stands, leading to he and his friends have all died on the spot , badly mutilated. After watching the film, it was very late, so my friends and I ate in the vicinity of the cinema, and then took the bus home, ending a day of enrichment.

    你好像是用翻譯機寫的翻譯機通常都寫的不好

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  • 1 decade ago

    在學校以後, I和我的朋友去戲院看電影,称"的標題; 最终目的地4." 這部影片故事是演員可以預言以一些個朋友看汽車最初是刺激天的喜悅,一個人是預言的一件可怕的事,他看見了史無前例的劇烈堆,一起通過在好少量更加高速的车祸,火球像殘骸飞行了立場,导致他,並且他的朋友有全部當場死了,非常切斷。 觀看了影片,並且时间非常晚,因此我朋友和我吃在戲院附近,然后採取公共汽車家,結束一天充實

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