言言 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

這一句簡單的英文,我已寫好,請幫忙修改.

這一句簡單的英文,我已寫好,請幫忙修改.

"我看到廣告,知道你們今明兩天,在228紀念公園,將舉辦大型活動,而且有票選的活動。希望你們的活動,辦得圓滿順利。"

I saw Ad, and noticed that you will have large activity at 228 memorial park and also selection activity today and tomorrow. Hope your activity will take place well.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我看到廣告,知道你們今明兩天,在228紀念公園,將舉辦大型活動,而且有票選的活動。希望你們的活動,辦得圓滿順利.

    I saw the ad, and learned that you will have a major activity at the 228 Memorial Park today and tomorrow, including a voting event. I wish you a fulfilling and smooth undertaking.

  • 1 decade ago

    我剛好看到這篇問題,我男友是外國人

    他說候選編號三號寫的比較好 :)

  • Joy
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    "我看到廣告,知道你們今明兩天,在228紀念公園,將舉辦大型活動,而且有票選的活動。希望你們的活動,辦得圓滿順利。"

    I saw Ad, and noticed that you will have large activity at 228 memorial park and also selection activity today and tomorrow. Hope your activity will take place well.

    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I saw (the ) Ad, and noticed that you (are going to) have a large activity at 228 memorial park (as well as an activity of poll) for today and tomorrw. Hope you have a successful activity.(or...wish you a successful activity)

    做了些微的修改,最怪的是最後一

    take place是舉辦的意思通常是跟地點時間連接,幾乎不會說是 take place well,比較會是;

    The deaf Olympics will take place in Taipei this Sep.

  • 1 decade ago

    I have seen the Ad, and noticed that you will have a large activity and also a ballot at 228 memorial park today and tomorrow. Wish your campaign will be completed smoothly and successfully.

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