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August 28, 2004

Dear Robert:

Thank you for you and your parents' enthusiastic treat last month. I had never been to America until you invited me to go there. Therefore, I was unfamiliar with your country. Thanks to you and your parents guiding me to admire some beautiful, spectacular scenery and renowned places which are eye-opener for me. The White House is the place I would like to visit before but I hadn't had a chance all the time. Consequently, I was so glad to have my dream come true through this trip. I was so impressed on the trip and had a very good time there. If I have opportunity, I will expect to visit you again.

Sincerely,

Ming Lin

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August 28, 2004

Dear Robert:

Thank you for you and your parent's enthusiastic treatment last month. I have never been to America before you invited me to go there so I was unfamilar with your country. However you and your parents washed away my worries and took me around to sight-see beautiful and spectacular sceneries and renowned places, which was quite an eye-opener for me. I have always been fascinated with the White House but the hope of visitng has only occured in my dreams. Consequently, I was very glad to have my dream come true though this trip. I was very impressed by this America trip and I enjoyed every moment I spent there. If another opportunity comes my way, I will not hesistate to grap on to it and expect to visit you again.

Yours Sincerely,

Ming Lin

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