it's me asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

so, ya think this works, works, works?

call it summer snow

sound white bougainvillea climbs

hiding green hooked thorns

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  • Daisy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Iit works!! And makes the job look easy.. nice one. =)

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  • 1 decade ago

    And what is one to surmise the thorns represent? A tenaciousness, treachery waiting, survival, good and evil, or green thorns? lol Planting kus again I see, it reads well.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    nice D

    when people say they don't get poetry, I say they don't read well

    this sets the stage by preparing you to see, gives you the image in action

    and closes with defined purpose

    or maybe I just have a vivid imagination...Ha...thanks

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  • 1 decade ago

    Works for me! Great write, Da!

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  • call it decorations

    honeysuckle, floral vines

    hanging from the trees

    Christmas in July?

    as natures gifts surround me

    fragrance fills the air

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  • 1 decade ago

    yes this works for me

    summer snow I love to see

    captured by your pen

    nice one DAH!

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  • 1 decade ago

    a blanket of summer snow indeed. I can see it in my mind's eye.

    good one Dah!

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  • Joe K
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Short and effective.. A picture is captured.

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  • Mizzy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    it works, on the surface, at the surface, and under the surface

    great one!

    chilly.....

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  • .
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    It be good cause I canna do it; I covet, yet applaud!

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