so, ya think this works, works, works?
call it summer snow
sound white bougainvillea climbs
hiding green hooked thorns
- DaisyLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
Iit works!! And makes the job look easy.. nice one. =)
- neonmanLv 71 decade ago
And what is one to surmise the thorns represent? A tenaciousness, treachery waiting, survival, good and evil, or green thorns? lol Planting kus again I see, it reads well.
- Anonymous1 decade ago
when people say they don't get poetry, I say they don't read well
this sets the stage by preparing you to see, gives you the image in action
and closes with defined purpose
or maybe I just have a vivid imagination...Ha...thanks
- Semp-listic!Lv 71 decade ago
Works for me! Great write, Da!
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- 1 decade ago
call it decorations
honeysuckle, floral vines
hanging from the trees
Christmas in July?
as natures gifts surround me
fragrance fills the air
- Sandy GigglesLv 61 decade ago
yes this works for me
summer snow I love to see
captured by your pen
nice one DAH!
- *Jellz*Lv 61 decade ago
a blanket of summer snow indeed. I can see it in my mind's eye.
good one Dah!
- Joe KLv 51 decade ago
Short and effective.. A picture is captured.
- MizzyLv 71 decade ago
it works, on the surface, at the surface, and under the surface
- .Lv 71 decade ago
It be good cause I canna do it; I covet, yet applaud!