帥哥哥 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我改正這幾句英文(急)

1.We delivered three equipments.

2.If he had two jobs, he would earn more money.

3.Buried in the ground, the police officer did not notice the diamond.

4.The woman, along with the man, have lived in the country side for a while.

5.Is there a great demand of luxury items in Hong Kong?

6.I suggest him to try green tea instead of black tea.

7.I went back to college to learn more knowledge.

8.I think he is a good teacher.

9.We have to pay a fee to use this highway.

10.I don’t know how to do.

11.We’re arguing about if we should buy a SUV or not.

12.He has been to Japan for a long time.

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  • 白兒
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    据我所知,equipment 並無複數形式。

    提供 three pieces of equipment 供參考用。

    2009-09-03 09:23:07 補充:

    1.We delivered three equipments.

    =>We delivered three pieces of equipment.

    2.If he had two jobs, he would earn more money. (O)

    3.Buried in the ground, the police officer did not notice the diamond.

    The police officer did not notice the diamond (which was) buried under the ground.

    4.The woman, along with the man, have lived in the country side for a while.

    The woman, along with the man, has lived in the country side for a while.

    5.Is there a great demand of luxury items in Hong Kong?

    =>Are there a great demand of luxury items in Hong Kong?

    6.I suggest him to try green tea instead of black tea.

    =>I suggest him try green tea instead of black tea.

    7.I went back to college to learn more knowledge. (O)

    8.I think he is a good teacher. (O)

    9.We have to pay a fee to use this highway. (O)

    10.I don’t know how to do.

    => I don’t know how to do it.

    => I don’t know what to do.

    11.We’re arguing about if we should buy a SUV or not.

    => We’re arguing about if we should buy a SUV.

    => We’re arguing about whether we should buy a SUV or not.

    12.He has been to Japan for a long time. (O)他曾去過(現在人不在日本)

    He has gone to Japan for a long time.他已經去了(現在人在日本)

    2009-09-04 07:54:38 補充:

    4.The woman, along with the man, have lived in the country side for a while.

    =>The woman, (who is) along with the man, has lived in the country side for a while.

    P.S. 此處關代當主詞不可省略。之前是我疏忽了。Sorry for that.

  • 1 decade ago

    1 逮是我找不到不好意思對不起:(

    2 If he had two jobs, he would "have earned" more money.

    3 "Because the diamond was" buried in the ground, the police officer did not notice the diamond. 分詞構句的主詞不一樣

    4 The woman, "who is" along with the man, "has" lived in the country side for a while.

    5 Is there "a" great "demand" of luxury items in Hong Kong?他好像不可數的樣子

    6.I suggest him "that he (should)" try green tea instead of black tea.省略should所以後面用原形動詞

    7.I "re-enter"the college to learn more knowledge.那個went back在翻譯上不恰當 比較適合用在回家之類的

    8.I think he is a good teacher.我找不到欸嘿嘿抱歉 是think後面要加that嗎??

    9.We have to pay a fee to use this highway. 歹勢我沒學過fee這個單字 好像是要付費的意思嗎~"~但是主詞是複數 fee用單數好像怪怪的

    10.I don't know how to do.有錯嗎ˊˋ""

    11.We're arguing "whether" should buy a SUV or not.用whether比較好

    12.He has "gone" to Japan for a long time.用has been是曾經去過

    對不起啊 小的文法也蠻弱的

    能給的都盡量給了@@"逮是歹勢

    Source(s): 全靠我高中所學知識~~
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