無名翔 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我看英文作文(要考英檢中級)

各位大大 眼看著時間還剩2個月

怕小的到那時應付不來

所以現在開始準備,提升戰力指數

希望能向各位高手們討教一下(順便附上我這篇能得的級數)

小的感激不盡

提示:近年來,在台灣不斷有新的健身俱樂部或活動育樂中心,許多人會定期上健身房,甚至加入會員。你認為最近台灣這些休閒運動場所四處林立,這麼普便存在的原因何在?請說明您的看法。(出自朗文書籍的題目)

In the recent years, gyms are located in many parts of the world. A lot of people prefer go there than any other place. The reason why is that being affected from abroad, like American. After all, in the globalization times, exotic cultures must be appreciated in any place.

Another reason is that everyone wants to stay healthy. As a result, they choose to go to gyms to exercise. Moreover,they have more opportunities to protect themselves from some sickness, such as cancer.Maybe that reasons cause gyms located in many parts of the world.

Update:

有不對的拼字或用法順便告訴我 謝謝

Update 2:

近幾年來,健身旁遍及世界任何地方,許多人喜歡去那兒盛過其他地方,原因是因為被國外影響,像美國,畢竟,在全球化的時代,外國文化在任何地方都會被接納

另一個原因是每個人都想要保持健康,因此,他們選擇去健身房運動,此外,他們也有更多機會去保付自己免於感染疾病,像是癌症,也許就是這些原因導致體育館遍及世上任何地方

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
    Best Answer

    In the recent years, gyms are located in many parts of the world.

    A lot of people prefer go there than any other place. (為什麼很多人喜歡去GYM? 你可以在這裡寫原因喔^^)

    A lot of people prefer to go to the gym than any other places because....

    The reason why is that being affected from abroad, like American.

    (REASON 是什麼? SENTENCE INCOMPLETE)

    After all, in the globalization times, exotic cultures must be appreciated in any place.

    (這一句因該要跟上一具有關連喔~)

    Another reason is that everyone wants to stay healthy.

    As a result, they choose to go to gyms to exercise.

    這兩句可以再一起~ (盡量不要用"EVERYONE" 因為不是大家都很再意健康 願意去GYM)

    Another reason is that many people are more aware of their health and wants to stay healthy.

    Moreover,they have more opportunities to protect themselves from some sickness, such as cancer.

    你可以寫: By going to the gym, it is also another way to keep their body strong and prevent them self from becoming ill.

    Maybe that reasons cause gyms located in many parts of the world.

    Maybe the two reasons: (第一個) and staying healthy are the motivation for people to goto the gym.

  • 1 decade ago

    In the recent years, gyms are located in many parts of the world.

    In the recent years, gyms has been popping up like mushrooms.

    A lot of people prefer go there than any other place.

    Prefer to A rather than B

    Prefer A to B

    The reason why is that being affected from abroad, like American.

    請附中文

    After all, in the globalization times, exotic cultures must be appreciated in any place.

    The era of globalization 全球化世代

    請附中文

    Another reason is that everyone wants to stay healthy.

    As a result, they choose to go to gyms to exercise.

    Moreover, they have more opportunities to protect themselves from some sickness, such as cancer.

    Sickness換成disease

    There are different types of drugs used to control sickness in cancer care.

    Sickness是不適的症狀

    Cancer 是一種疾病

    Maybe that reasons cause gyms located in many parts of the world.

    Reasons是複數,要用those修飾

    Cause 受詞 + 不定詞

    附中文

    可以附上全篇中文嗎?

  • eleven
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    您可能要再重新加強語法句構觀念!

    這篇,正常的話不會通過吧!

    幫您改一點意義也沒有,

    因為,您很多基礎句構都不對,

    邏輯不夠通順,

    敍述不夠清楚!

    抱歉說得這麼明白,

    但是,若不明說,

    您恐怕會一直依賴別人改,

    但這對您一點幫助也沒有,

    英文作文很重視邏輯、基本句構要寫對,

    這得自己多練習多思考甚至得跟教師們學,

    不是靠網友幫就可學會;

    用字簡單但是文法句構邏輯轉折語有注意的人,

    會比單字豐富但沒其他優點者分數要高--

    以上是針對中級程度。

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