Kevin asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

請高手幫我訂正看圖英作

題目:上星期五,艾迪的英文老師說星期二要考試,但是他星期一卻只顧玩耍,根本沒有準備,結果考的很差.請依照下面的圖片,寫一篇約50字的故事.

圖一:

老師在艾迪上課的時候老師說:"Tuesday Test"(這部分我不知道該怎麼打就照打了XD

圖二:

星期一艾迪去打球根看電視

圖三:

艾迪看到58分的成績單 哭了

我的作文:

Last Friday, Eddie's teacher said "Tuesday test"

Eddie just wanted to play basketball and watch TV on Monday.

He never prepared for the test. Next day, he did

poorly on the test, so he was very sad. And then, Eddie

promised that he will study hard.

批改注意:

1.針對我的句子修改

2.詳細的中文解釋 例如:XXX不行,通常用來OOO

1 Answer

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  • SKIITE
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    Last Friday, Eddie's teacher said "Tuesday test"

    圖片中的老師如果說"Tuesday test"的話

    這一句就沒問題

    Eddie just wanted to play basketball and watch TV on Monday.

    這句沒問題

    He never prepared for the test. Next day, he did

    poorly on the test, so he was very sad.

    這裡可以把他得到的分數寫上去

    可以改成

    He never prepared for the test. Next day, he saw 58 on his grade sheet.

    He was really sad and cried.

    And then, Eddie promised that he will study hard.

    這句也可以

    只是時態要一致

    And then, Eddie promised that he "would" study hard. "would" 而不是 "will"

    大致上都很通順

    前後也有連貫

    加油!

    希望幫到

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