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Dear all,

There are two restaurants we can consider a welcome lunch held, the details as shown in below,

1.Tong Roma

Cuisine: Western style

Location: 4/F., W Square

2.King’s Garden Restaurant

Cuisine: Japanese & Hong Kong style

Location: 1/F., King’s Hotel

Please let me have your preference.

Cheers,

Name

Answer 1

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Dear all,

There are two restaurants we can consider for the welcome lunch which will take place on next Monday. Please choose from one of the following restaurants:

1.Tong Roma

Cuisine: Western style

Location: 4/F., W Square

2.King’s Garden Restaurant

Cuisine: Japanese & Hong Kong style

Location: 1/F., King’s Hotel

Thank you.

Yours Truly,

Name

Answer 2

Dear all,

It is a pleasure to let you know that we will have a welcome lunch on next Monday. There are two restaurants we may consider. Details are as follows :

1.Tong Roma

Cuisine: Western style

Location: 4/F., W Square

2.King’s Garden Restaurant

Cuisine: Japanese & Hong Kong style

Location: 1/F., King’s Hotel

Please let me have your preference.

Cheers,

Name