shelly asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

全民英檢中級”中翻英”!!!

請問這題中翻英這樣翻譯是否正確呢?謝謝喔: )

氣象預報說昨晚會有一個颱風侵襲台灣。颱風過後蔬菜價格持續上漲。林太太擔心菜價會上漲的更厲害,一大早就去超級市場採購蔬菜。沒想到,店裡擠滿了人潮。林太太最後排了很長的隊伍,才付錢買到蔬菜。

The weather forecast said a typhoon would hit Taiwan last night. The price of vegetables keeped increasing after the typhoon. Ms. Lin worried the price of vegetables would increasing seriously, so she got up very early to purchase vegetables in supermarket. However, there were many perople in the supermarket. Finally, Ms. Lin was in a long line before paying it.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The weather forecast said "that" a typhoon would hit Taiwan last night.

    這句還可以,加個that更好。

    The price of vegetables "kept" "going up" after the typhoon.

    keep三態: keep ; kept ; kept

    increase太多了,這邊改用going up即可。

    Ms. Lin "was afraid if" the price would increase "sharply",

    worry後面加about,但用在這邊還是怪,

    所以用afraid if

    seriously比較適用在seriously problem,這邊用sharply比較商業用法一點。

    so she got up early to get more vegetables in "the" supermarket.

    supermarket加冠詞。

    However, there were many perople in "there",

    supermarket現身太多次,所以用代詞there

    so she "stayed in a long line to get to the cashier".

    這一整句太饒口了,直接幫你改。

    希望幫到囉~!

    Source(s): 5年
  • 1 decade ago

    The meteorology forecast says would have a typhoon to encroach upon Taiwan last night.Typhoon later on the vegetable price continuously soars.Mrs. Lin worries that the vegetables price will soar more badly and in early morning buys a vegetable in supermarket.Pack with a dense crowd tide in store unexpectedly.Mrs. Lin finally arranged a very long troop and just paid to buy a vegetable.

    Source(s): 自己
  • 1 decade ago

    大致上意思是通的 但是有些文字的意思 還有文法

    例如

    the weather forecast said THERE WOULD BE a typhoon HITTING

    Taiwan last night. the price of vegetables KEPT increasing after the typhoon CAME. Ms.Lin WAS worried ABOUT the price of vegetables would GET HIGHER AND HIGHER, so she went to purchase vegetables in the supermarket in an early mornig. however, IT WAS CROWDED WITH people.

    Finally, ms,Lin bought the vegetables after she queued for a long time.

    我用大寫把一些小缺點寫了出來 你可以參考看看

    加油 中級英檢不難的

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  • 1 decade ago

    氣象預報說昨晚會有一個颱風侵襲台灣。颱風過後蔬菜價格持續上漲。林太太擔心菜價會上漲的更厲害,一大早就去超級市場採購蔬菜。沒想到,店裡擠滿了人潮。林太太最後排了很長的隊伍,才付錢買到蔬菜。

    The weather forecast said a typhoon would hit Taiwan last night. The price of vegetables keeped increasing after the typhoon. Ms. Lin worried the price of vegetables would increasing seriously, so she got up very early to purchase vegetables in supermarket. However, there were many perople in the supermarket. Finally, Ms. Lin was in a long line before paying it.

    1.Ms. Lin worried the price of vegetables would increasing seriously,

    應該是

    Ms. Lin worried the price of vegetables would increase seriously,

    2.However, there were many perople in the supermarket.

    應該是

    T0 her surprise, there were many perople in the supermarket.

    其它大致上是通順的

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