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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文好的幫我改錯(拜託了) 有點急

以下是我翻譯的需要中英對照(拜託大家幫我改錯)

或者是要如何翻譯 謝謝了

環保意識的興起已成潮流,但不論是生產者或消費者都有不爭的事實─

雙方的認知仍停留在傳統交易。進而造成整個產業都在供需不對稱的拉距下,

形成只有口號,而無明顯成效,因此如何妥善處理雙方的差異更顯格外重要。

本研究擬運用通路商的優點為基礎,透過相關文獻探討,消費者購買決策分析,

量販通路商談之研究發現,進而提出改雙方差異之建議,如下說明:

政府、企業、消費者三方皆在永續發展,地球只有一個的共識下,

思考讓整個綠色產業形成良性循環的方法,並達成經濟有效,社會公平,

生態平衡的目標。

The realize and rise of environmental protection had become the trend. No matter producers or consumers who have both cognition of traditional traders are definitly facts. Therefore,it is drawing and refusing for the whole industry in the asymmetric demand-supply. And it is not obvious effects,only slogans.

To deal properly with the variations on the producers and consumers is more important. The research based on making use of the advantage concrete proposal for improving the variations of both sides that it goes through relative references, the analysis of consumer's purchasing decision, the questiponnaire investigation of trader.

Under the consensus: The only earth with sustainable developments, companies, and governments think fow to find a way of forming the positive cycle of the green industryand to achieve a goal of efficient economy, and balanced biology.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The conscious of environmental protection had become the trend. However, the bilateral cognition between manufactures and consumers is still stay in traditional-trade idea which makes the environmental protection business unproductive and becoming nothing but chant.Therefore, it is important to deal properly with the contrast between manufactures and consumers.

    (第一段: "進而造成整個產業都在供需不對稱的拉距下" 這句實在看不懂ORZ 所以跳過)(但我認為不影響文義,您可放心^^)

    (variation有變異,變化的涵義,建議使用contrast,表達人之間的懸殊差異)

    The research based on the advantage of distributor, and made the suggestion of resolving the contrast problem between manufactures and consumers through the relative references, the analysis of consumer's purchasing decision, and the discover of the investigation about distributor.

    (第二段: 大部分的中文詞彙太過專業,例如 用通路商的優點為基礎 ?? ,幾乎全照字面翻@@)

    We/I believe that the main approach to effective environmental protection is to build the consensus of sustainable development and the resource-limitation on earth between government, manufactures, and consumers. Under such consensus, we can find the way to form prime recycling inside the whole green-industry and achieve the goal of efficient economy, fair society, and balanced nature.

    (第三段:環保可以達成 有效經濟,公平社會?! 這有點讓我難以想像,我只能說太過專業了@@)(不過大體上還是照字面翻,並加入了一點其他元素的搭配,使上下文更流暢)

    (整體來講: 這篇文章過於專業難懂@@ 環保可以跟通路商,生產者或消費者雙方差異,通路商的優點,公平的社會,等議題扯上關係,著實讓我開了眼界...)(所以大體上,遇有專業部分的句子多直接按字面翻議,合不合文本原旨就不得而知了)

  • 1 decade ago

    坦白的說, 中文的內容都有點不知所云, 有些名詞不是通用的名詞, 英文翻起來很困難. 以下的英文翻譯給您作參考. 或許您可以自己再修改一下

    環保意識的興起已成潮流,但不論是生產者或消費者都有不爭的事實─

    雙方的認知仍停留在傳統交易。進而造成整個產業都在供需不對稱的拉距下,

    形成只有口號,而無明顯成效,因此如何妥善處理雙方的差異更顯格外重要。

    The rise of the awareness in environmental protection has become a trend. Yet both the producers and the consumers face a definitive fact – the recognition on both sides remain in the traditional transactions. Consequently, the entire industry is trapped in the tug of war between incompatible demand and supply, resulting in slogans only, and without real impacts. Therefore it is of greater importance to properly resolve the differences between the two sides.

    本研究擬運用通路商的優點為基礎,透過相關文獻探討,消費者購買決策分析,

    量販通路商談之研究發現,進而提出改雙方差異之建議,如下說明:

    This research intends to build upon the advantage of [我不知道通路商是什麼意思, 您自己加進去吧], work through review of related publications, analysis of consumers’ purchasing decision, research findings from volume sales merchants survey, and present proposals to minimize the difference between the two sides.

    政府、企業、消費者三方皆在永續發展,地球只有一個的共識下,

    思考讓整個綠色產業形成良性循環的方法,並達成經濟有效,社會公平,

    生態平衡的目標。

    Government, businesses, and consumers will contemplate, with the consensus of one earth and continuous development, the way to foster a healthy cycle for the green industry, and achieve the goals of efficient economy, just society, and balanced ecology.

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