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這是篇看圖作文,有幾十輛將近百的車輛塞在陸上,在晚上,有幾個建築物與分隔島。

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The streets to The World Games were crammed with hundreds of cars at night. The speed is only 10 mph so that each car could hardly move. The drivers, along with their family, was about to the stadium of The World Games; however, because most people supposed that driving their own vehicles was more and more convenient than taking public transportation nowadays, they would rather drive their own car to travel.

More and more visitors drove their own car to the stadium so the traffic jam remained unsolved; therefore, the local government have not sooner seen this awful situation than the officials instructed tens of polices soon to ease this extremely traffic jam. Finally, on the other day, the officials claimed that they would limit the passengers of every car to over three people to prevent the traffic jam from occurring.

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the local government have==>had not sooner seen this awful situation than the officials instructed tens of polices soon to ease this extremely traffic jam

當地政府ㄧ看到這糟糕的情況,官方人員就迅速派遣幾十位警察去減緩這非常嚴重的塞車情況

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The streets leading to The World Games were crammed with hundreds of cars at night. The speed was only 10 mph so that each car could hardly move. The drivers, along with their family, was about to the stadium of The World Games; however, most people supposed that driving their own vehicles was getting/becoming more and more convenient than taking public transportation . As a result, they would rather drive their own car to travel.

    More and more visitors drove their own car to the stadium so the traffic jam remained unsolved; therefore, the local government have not sooner seen this awful situation than the officials instructed tens of polices soon to ease this extremely traffic jam. Finally, on the other day, the officials claimed that they would limit the passengers of every car to over three people to prevent the traffic jam from occurring.

    大大您好~

    我改了一點點,第二段有一句話看不太懂,「local government have not sooner seen this awful situation than the officials instructed tens of polices soon to ease this extremely traffic jam.」感覺有點不太順,可否麻煩您打上中文的意思,我再給您意思參考看看^^

    2009-08-06 19:17:43 補充:

    no sooner~than 一~就

    The local government had no sooner seen this awful situation than the officials delegated tens of polices to slow down this serious traffic jam.

    2009-08-06 19:17:55 補充:

    no sooner...than也可以用成倒裝句唷

    No sooner had the local government seen this awful situation than the officials delegated tens of polices to slow down this serious traffic jam.

  • 1 decade ago

    對世界比賽的街道用数百汽車填入了在晚上。 速度只是10英里/小時,以便每輛汽車能幾乎不移動。 司機,與他們的家庭一起,到世界比賽的體育場; 然而,因為多数人民假設驾驶他們自己的車的那比現今乘公共交通越來越方便的,他們寧可將驾驶他們自己的汽車到旅行。訪客越來越驾驶了他們自己的汽車到體育場,因此交通堵塞依然是未解決; 因此,當地政府比官員被指示的十倍很快維持治安極端緩和此交通堵塞快未看這個可怕的情況。 终于,在另一天,官員声称他們會限制每輛汽車的乘客到三個人防止交通堵塞發生。

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