what do you think of the first chapter of my book?

i worked really hard on it and i think it turned out really good. i want other peoples opinions tho. what do you think?

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2705049/1/Twist

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  • 1 decade ago
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    yeah i like it but at this part... I as excited as ever ......u wrote as instead of was so yeah good job!!! i want to keep reading! lol

  • 1 decade ago

    Oh wow

    its really really good =]

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