What do you think of this?

I'm getting close,

closer and closer

i'm getting close,

close to the end

i dont think i can weather

whether the wear, or the care

everything is distant,

distant as i stare

i need somthing more,

somthing i can adore

i need to want,

wanting to need

but this hunger i cannot feed

following footsteps, not knowing where they lead

i follow, not knowing why,

wishing to be freed

like a train on the tracks, my lifeless life wanders past

i regret my doubts, my life a drought

though i may not know,

secrets i hold close

meaning in life i need the most

i wish there were a way

to relive yesterday

so much passed me by

leaving wishing i would just die

5 Answers

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    It's good. I feel the same way you do, man.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that is amazing!!! really well done. i love it

    answer mine please


    have a gooooooood day :D;)

  • 1 decade ago

    (cough, cough) emo (cough, cough)

  • 1 decade ago


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    1 decade ago


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