YOU! yeah you...open this question... what? i dare ya! are you chicken?

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hey:) now that youre here. i got a question. what do you think of my lyrics? comments/questions/rantings of depravity? please?

Well

I'm gonna be like Darby Crash

Dying so young cause i'm living so fast

Gotta get away from the street machine

looks so pretty but it ain't too clean

Gonna live the life gotta have some fun

be 6 feet under when i'm done

praying to your God with your face in the gutter

isnt this the life you asked for or did you st-st-stutter?

my head's flying too fast for your feet to follow

slam it in a vein now dont think about tomorrow

i want the world now wont you be my lover

take from you what i can before i find another.

'Cause

I'm gonna be like Darby Crash

Dying so young cause i'm living so fast

Gotta get away from the street machine

looks so pretty but it ain't too clean

Gonna live the life gotta have some fun

i'll be 6 feet under when i'm done

now baby

who's coming with me?

Update:

Lmao Mad Hatter. i hope you answer all your questions like that!

Answer 1

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There has never been a dare that the Mad Hatter would leave alone

And hes so happy to have a chance to peruse your new poem

frankly someone of your talent he never could bash

He really loved your tribute to the late Darby Crash

^^^^^^^^^^^

the Mad Hatter takes his hat off to you!

and as a matter of fact, he DO!!!

Answer 2

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Answer 3

I don't like the Heroin reference, but I will respect it, but overall, my friend, I have to agree with House, it is much better than the whiny stuff you see on here and all over the poular/mainstream music scene now. Very rebellious and strong sounding. I think it's great.

Answer 4

I actually liked it. This is so much better than the whiny 'my life sucks' style I usually read in the poetry section. Rock on.

Answer 5

Lmao Mad Hatter.

Now that that's out of the way, great song. If you ever release it, title it what you titled this question.

Answer 6

I think it's fairly good. I liked it, especially the reference to Darby Crash.

Answer 7

pretty cool

and very punky

im a fan of the germs too

Answer 8

WOW that was so much better than all the other lyrics that get posted here hahah. awesome :]

Answer 9

Good job. I'm a songwriter as well.

Answer 10

your poem was sofa king great!