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小E asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文劇情對話>”<急

Media: According to the reporter, an old and live alone woman had been locked in the bathroom of the toilet. Because of the bathroom is too small and she has been found out after 7 days recently. Now let’s return of that situation at that time.

( seven days ago, an old woman was in the bathroom. when an old woman just open the door wanted to go out, just because she was unguarded, so she fell down and locked with the toilet.)

Woman: Oh, shit….. help !………

(after seven days, one neighbor thought something wrong. Why an old woman didn’t go out these days so long. So she put the door bell and she heard someone’s help. Then she called the 911)

Woman: H-e-l-p……..

Neighbor: Is this 911? I need an ambulance and someone’s help! A woman just locked with a toilet and she can’t move by herself.

(10 minutes later)

Fireman: Where is the old woman?

Neighbor: Bathroom!

Fireman: OK! Don’t worry. Everything will be fine.

(So the fireman went the bathroom and help the old woman out.1 hour later…)

Woman: God! Thanks. I can’t believe that I am still alive.

Fireman: You should go to the hospital and need some checkup.

Woman: OK.

(So the woman went to the hospital and see a doctor.)

Doctor: You will be fine, just has dehydration. You need more water and take cares of yourself. If you have some other question, you can ask me.

Woman: Thanks. I am glad to meet you.

Doctor: Me, too.

Media: Thanks for join us. We will see tomorrow.

以上是我打的英文

請大大幫我糾正錯誤

這很重要 我到時候要用

尤其是時態不是很清楚.....有錯順便跟我說哪裡錯了

謝謝>"<感恩 ^ ^.....(害怕錯很多)

Update:

.....我是需要大大幫我糾正文法錯誤

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Media: According to the report, an old woman who lived alone had been locked in the bathroom. Because the bathroom is too small and she has been found out after 7 days. Now let's return to the situation about that time.

    ( Seven days ago, an old woman was in the bathroom. when the old woman just opened the door and wanted to go out,she was so unguarded that she fell down and was locked in the toilet.)

    Woman: Oh, shit….. help !………

    (after seven days, one of the old woman's neighbors noticed that something was wrong. Why has the old woman not gone out these days so long. So she rang the door bell and she heard someone's help. Then she called 911)

    Woman: H-e-l-p....

    Neighbor: Is this 911? I need an ambulance and someone's help! A woman is just locked in a toilet and she can't move by herself.

    (10 minutes later)

    Fireman: Where is the old woman?

    Neighbor: She's in the bathroom!

    Fireman: OK! Don't worry. Everything will be fine.

    (Then the fireman went into the bathroom and helped the old woman out.1 hour later....)

    Woman: God! Thanks. I can't believe that I am still alive.

    Fireman: You should go to the hospital and need a checkup.

    Woman: OK.

    (So the woman went to the hospital to see a doctor.)

    Doctor: You will be fine, just has some dehydration. You need more water and take care of yourself. If you have any question, you can ask me anytime.

    Woman: Thank you. I am so glad to meet you.

    Doctor: Me too.

    Media: Thanks for joining us. See you tomorrow.

    解析:

    我把上一位 的解答者 在做一些修正

    1.because of + N.

    2.介係詞 後 + V-ING

    其他的就做一點點修改

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  • 1 decade ago

    Media: According to the report, an old woman who lived alone had been locked in the bathroom. Because of the bathroom is too small and she has been found out after 7 days recently. Now let's return to the situation about that time.

    ( seven days ago, an old woman was in the bathroom. when the old woman just opened the door and wanted to go out,she was so unguarded that she fell down and was locked in the toilet.)

    Woman: Oh, *****….. help !………

    (after seven days, one of the old woman's neighbors noticed that something was wrong. Why has the old woman not go out these days so long. So she rang the door bell and she heard someone's help. Then she called 911)

    Woman: H-e-l-p....

    Neighbor: Is this 911? I need an ambulance and someone's help! A woman is just locked in a toilet and she can't move by herself.

    (10 minutes later)

    Fireman: Where is the old woman?

    Neighbor: She's in the bathroom!

    Fireman: OK! Don't worry. Everything will be fine.

    (Then the fireman went into the bathroom and helped the old woman out.1 hour later....)

    Woman: God! Thanks. I can't believe that I am still alive.

    Fireman: You should go to the hospital and need a checkup.

    Woman: OK.

    (So the woman went to the hospital to see a doctor.)

    Doctor: You will be fine, just has some dehydration. You need more water and take care of yourself. If you have any question, you can ask me anytime.

    Woman: Thank you. I am so glad to meet you.

    Doctor: Me, too.

    Media: Thanks for join us. We will see tomorrow.

    我改了一些時態的錯誤 還把一些句子改的唸起來順一點

    還在一些句子裡加了一些文法和比較有感情的用法 例如最後老婆婆跟醫生說謝謝 用Thank you會比較誠懇 這樣聽起來會更有感覺

    希望我幫你做的修正對你有益 祝你成功!!

    Source(s): 自己和電子辭典
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  • 媒體:據報導,一名與獨居婦女被鎖在浴室的廁所。由於衛生間太小,她已發現了7天之後,最近。現在讓我們回到這種情況在那個時候。

    ( 7天前,一名老婦在衛生間。當一名老婦剛剛開門想出去,只是因為她是無人看守的,所以她和鎖定下降的廁所。 )

    女人:噢, ***** ... ..救命啊! ... ... ...

    (七天後,一名鄰居覺得有些不對勁。為什麼一個老婦不出去這些天這麼久。於是,她把門鈴,她聽到別人的幫助。然後,她被稱為911 )

    女子:氫電子的L - P ... ... ..

    鄰居:這是911 ?我需要一輛救護車和別人的幫助!一個女人只鎖定一個廁所,她無法移動了自己。

    ( 10分鐘後)

    消防隊:哪裡是老太太?

    鄰居:浴室!

    消防員:行!不要擔心。一切都會很好。

    (所以,消防員去衛生間,並幫助老嫗out.1小時後... )

    女子:上帝!謝謝。我簡直不敢相信,我還活著。

    消防員:你應該去醫院,並需要一些檢查。

    女:行。

    (所以,女子前往醫院看醫生。 )

    醫生:你將被罰款,只是有脫水。您需要更多的水,並採取在乎自己。如果您有其他一些問題,您可以問我。

    女:謝謝。我很高興見到你。

    醫生:我也一樣。

    媒體:感謝您加入我們的行列。我們將看到的明天。

    Source(s): 自己
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