Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I just had a thought (Quick! Capture it) (comment/critique)?

This may or may not be part of something bigger. I just had this image and wanted to share.

thoughts

like rainbow swirls

in oil puddles

twirl around

my blacktop

pretty pollution

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  • MDB
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    thoughts,

    like birds

    caught

    in the oil spillage.

  • 1 decade ago

    Very nice use of the commonplace. I like it a lot. Beauty in our own destruction is high praise for the value of beauty to the human soul.

  • Mizzy
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    no way...

    that thought

    has been in my mind too

    oil puddles, the rainbows within

    can I have a second glass?

    I like this quick short beauty

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    OMG do oil spills look like rainbows?

    I never noticed that before!

    - Me at 5.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Yeah

    expand and contract

    like tar in cracks

    this one was great!

  • 1 decade ago

    It's good for a little short poem and think you have quite a poetic mind and hope that you have more poems!!

  • 1 decade ago

    Pretty cool, little girly feelings with a dark monotone backdrop. Gritty **** mate!

  • -
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    I thought it was sweet and fun.....

    sometimes we need to lighten up around here!

    ma

  • 1 decade ago

    sweet. I think you may have more brewing but I do like it so far!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    we are pretty pollution

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