英文字我介紹

面試要求寫英文自我介紹 請幫我看看寫的是否有問題 或如何更完整 錯字或摽點符號請幫我留意 感激! this is the first time to use English to introduce myself My name is --- and I am 24 years old. I live in Tao Yuan General Hospital nearby. I have a happy family.There are 7 people in my family, including my parents, 3 younger sisters, and 1 younger... show more 面試要求寫英文自我介紹
請幫我看看寫的是否有問題
或如何更完整
錯字或摽點符號請幫我留意
感激!
this is the first time to use English to introduce myself

My name is --- and I am 24 years old. I live in Tao Yuan General Hospital nearby.

I have a happy family.There are 7 people in my family, including my parents, 3 younger sisters, and 1 younger brother.

I'm proud of nurse job because I can not only help others but it is a power of my life.

In the future, I hope I will treat everything in a positive manner rather than escaping from difficulties.

I will try my best to be responsible and independent.

Finally,I know my English is not good enough, so I will keep studying it.thank you for your attention.

Have a nice day!
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